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Silas5399


Just another guy that writes and games as a hobby

Comments ( 16 )

LOVE IT LOVE IT

A very rushed sex scene with no build up to it. Gotta work on your pacing dude.

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Sorry but I was stuck on that chapter for awhile, and I just wanted to get it done

10280628
In my opinion, if you stuck on a sex scene then it might be best to put it off to later chapters and focus on the main story instead. The story has potential but you just need to pace yourself better and focus on the world building.

Duried? What does that mean?

10291900
Where did you find that

Really liking this so far, always been a fan of fics that manage to connect two franscises like this.

Very good read so far, I cant wait for the next chapter.

Please do some more

"What are you some kinda bucking therapist?!" I screamed.

He chuckled at this. "I don't know, but it's not like either of us are going anywhere, anytime soon." He said with a grin. I sighed before telling him my tale.

Does Gael even know what a therapist is?

Would love to see more of this love it:pinkiesmile:

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