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*survivor
Not bad
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Needs some editing and a little more in the way of storytelling. By the way, if you're going to have Alucard's symbol as your thumbnail, the story should at least be Hellsing related.
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Eventually there will be and this is just the introduction.
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This is just the beginning
more
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Glad you like.
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i do not like. i love it
Ok a few things one: great job another gold star story 👍 two: can we make suggestions for things to do three: what level is the hyper adaptation at, like grow more arms level, or whatever doesn’t kill me makes me stronger level four: can he use metal in peoples blood, and it’s ANY metal right, so gold and sodium and mercury are on the table of things he can control, does he also have immunity to their negative affects? Five he can only affect ten minutes of time at a time, could he find a way to extend that, and how much control of time we talking, slow and speeding only, or outright stopping, because if he can stop time he should be careful due to the feedback of all kinetic energy in the universe converging on him, because to stop time completely you need to stop all motion in the universe, which would simultaneously burn and freeze you due to being the hottest temperature in existence while at absolute zero temperature everywhere else. Sorry for the word dump, again you give me so many ideas for what could be done to exploit the limits and rules
And I thought RWBY Gods were a priority to be slayed
Why can't he create himself a little weapon
For example a small dagger, metal shard extending into a long shard, sword
Or a fast projectile that he will manipulate with his power
Something like Yondu Yaka arrow from MCU
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Or a metal ball doing the same
Or even better a metal ball changing shape, so if the is armor in the way it will change into an arrowhead shape and similar
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He could do that eventual but right now he is barely doing the easier stuff.
Update?
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Sorry I will get back to it when I can, there are just A few problems that hit me all at once.
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That's ok I understand