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Interesting you fought my attention.

With this last part there must be a sex tag in the description.

Drr

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Need another tag in description

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Thanks, actually forgot about that.

Alright everyone, I just realized a mistake. I say here that Harvest has a sword. She does not. I changed that before I posted, but I apparently missed here. So please, laugh at my stupid mistake, as I dont want to fix it, as its a funny mistake. Please know though, that she has the Threaded Cane.

I like how morbid how the first thing celestia asks is how did he taste

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Thanks. I thought it would be a little funny, and also, given what the xenomorphs look like, she would easily be able to tell they are carnivores.

Was the Bane reference necessary i mean yeah I get it but I just can't not imagine it in Banes voice and smile at it. It was great btw

Comment posted by Failsafe99 deleted Sep 27th, 2020

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I couldnt help but imagine Bane as well. But yes, I thought it was neccessary as well as needed.

My child who was watching the six came bacl, and told me something about missing bridesmaids, and I remembered. The bridesmaids were in the crystal caverns under Chrysalis spell.

just pointing out this common typo

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Thanks. I didnt see it, and I'll fix it immediately.

dam nice story but when will the next one come out?:heart:

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Soon, I'm currently having to rewrite chapters that I have started for other stories, am writing new stories, and am having trouble keeping them and my life going for the moment. Nothing that shouldn't be fixed soon, and this is one of the ones I am currently trying to finish a chapter for.

I wonder if she tested to see if instead of killing their host, they (her children) could come out through the mouth or the ass.

After all that would make her childrens hosts reusable, which would mean if she gets a child that is powerful from one host, she could reuse said host for more powerful children.

But she would have to keep them healthy, in order to prolong there stay as living hosts.

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Hmmmmmmmmm, good point. I'll figure something out. Honestly it shouldnt be too hard. Only thing is im pretty sure the embryos go into the lungs, which is part of why they have to burst out. I'll figure something out, thanks for the idea.

"Good work my dear. Come home, and I can help heal the wound." I reply I will, I just want to rest a little before doing so, and she understands, before severing the telepathic link. Then, I smell cupcakes, and look around to see Pinkie has come into my layer. I hiss.

"Now thats rude, I just came to give you some cupcakes after what happened." Pinkie says, looking right at me in the dark. I just crawl out, and look at her.

Yeah, but it's also rude to break into someone elses secret hideout.

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Hmmmm, fair point. But i just wanted to help my friend Harvest, and cupcakes is a good way to do that! But you are right, so ill apoligize whenever the author finishes writing the next chapter.:pinkiesad2:

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Huh.. I just thought that they used the stomach, after all there are the melted and being consumed nutrients in there (which they could absorb to grow, because no one has survived after its done so for all we no they could experience a bit of malnutrition later if they survived). As well as the fact that since they have acid blood, stomach acids shouldn't be too hard to handle even in the chestburster stage of there life cycle.

Here's a way for you to do it, and it actually makes sense. So not a lot of people can go against it, others will (try to go against it) but they won't have enough evidence to back up their statements.

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Actually, someone did survive. One of the Dark Horse comics tells of a man who survived a chest burster, or at least an embryo growing inside him. He was a scientist, and i dont know all that much about him, I dont even remember his name. But I dont remember hearing about malnutrition either.

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Well that's news to me, and he may have eaten something later which counter acted the small amount of malnutrition, he would have gotten after the chestburster left or was taken away.

But you can still use what I said so that the queen can be smarter, and rather then wasting possible xenomorph factories on a one time use. She can make it so the local fauna have a sort of peaceful time were they can bring there numbers back up, after all she has most likely has been hunting them to use them as incubators and food for her children and herself.

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Your right and I do plan too. The entite time we've talked, I've been thinking on how to do it. At the end of the day, I thank you for your idea. Thank you.

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Your welcome, but remember my comments are just suggestions or regular comments. Not commands or other such things, because (unlike others, yes you, you know who you are) I don't force my opinion.

So basically what I'm trying to say is that I'll give suggestions here or there, but ultimately you can take it or leave it I won't be offended.

Well have a nice day/night depending on where you are.

Hadda break off mid-chapter, because suddenly, Twilight is a Princess despite the Crystal Empire just being freed, and she wasn't one before going.....so... When did it happen? It's even more sudden than the canon version.

when will the next chapter come out:pinkiecrazy:

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