Watch out for the incoming Solar Force.
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Jejeje the only thing missing in that scene at the end was adding
"…as they made their way out of the shop, one of the employs yell at them in frustration saying "HEY, I don't care if you used them on an omelette or as shampoo, but have pay for those eggs!"
Only for Rarity to those 2 bits at the employer as payment
Hope no one heard them from outside the house, or else they might thing that someone was killing poor Rarity, jejeje.
Great chapter, can't wait to see what would happen next
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I'm pretty sure Solar already paid for those before bumping into Rarity.
9889300
Oh so they bump when he was exiting the shop? Good to know
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Actually yes, he had already payed for the eggs before he bumped into Rarity.
9889463
Good, and because I get a bit confused, those this mean he and Rarity are an item now? Or does she only wished to help him 'become a man'
Or are you planing for him to ask her where are they on their relationship and clear the air on what they are now?
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I think thier going to be like friends with benefits, at least for now. The stories only just getting started, I don’t want Solar to find his true love or true loves just yet.
9889509
Fair enough, I will wait patiently for the next chapter
By the way I just wanna say that your story is amazing, this is something I've been looking for and I hope you can keep this up.
That was a pretty great chapter!! Hope the new one will come out sooner
Je any chance, Applejack hasn't seen Solar yet?
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Thank you for saying so. I loved your story too, I hope you write more. And yeah I hope to get the next chapter done sooner as well, but I have got other stuff I need to write.
I will have to dispute Solar Force, Luna is the most beautiful pony.
9950497
I said one of the most beautiful, not the most beautiful.
Applejack should definitely go next.
I want more!
Face it, Solar. You just hit the jackpot
I just noticed the character tags. Does that mean he'll sleep with Sunset in a later chapter?
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Yes, definitely. I like Sunset too much to not have her in this.
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Yay. She's my favorite character. And considering the quality of this story so far, then I believe the clop with her will be great.
Do first Pinkie Pie
Hmmm part of me is curious if the option extend beyond the main six, but if not. Then I say Pinkie Pie.
Also, I see what you did there, Solar just technically conquer all 3 tribes.
I vote Pinkie before Twi
Pinkie Pie baking creampies first!
Wow dude, that was amazing! Please do Pinkie Pie next!!!
Pinkie, nuff said.
Awesome chapter. Only thing I could have asked for more, is more Ass play with Applejack. AJ has got that Honkey Tonk Badonkadonk, butt I am at least satisfied. Just feel not enough clop fics show her best asset well, regardless of form. I'm open to suggestions to prove me in correct if any can point me that way. XD
I want twilight to be next!
Bet we would hear spike shouting "nnnnnoooooooo!!" any second now
nice one, you lucky guy
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So you finally got round to reading this chapter. Hope you liked it. What’s your favourite part so far?
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I like AJ's purring, it's so cute and sexy
I'm not the biggest Pinkie Pie fan, but I feel that you should do her next for the sake of the line up
This was a interesting beginning can't wait to see where this is going.
So it begins his epic Journey.
This was a awesome chapter.
This was sweet and epic I vote Pinkie.
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I’m glad your enjoying it so far. I’m still trying to write the next chapter, and Pinkie will be next, it’s just coming along slowly for various reasons.
Wow, great job on keeping the next one anonymous!
Ooooo, I can't wait til the next one. Hopefully you have an easier time writing that than this one.
And who might be the mysterious mare? Je I say it either Ms. Cake or Fluttershy…because I don't think Twilight has ever say that word
Was he under a curse or so, that why he was never noticed?
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I believe the Comicstorian described this kind of character the best:
"He wasn't popular or unpopular; not loved or hated by everyone, he was just... there."
And trust me, there are plenty of people like that in life.
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In my mind, it’s more like he’s just been overlooked his whole life rather than cursed and now he’s been given a bit of help with getting noticed.
Weeks or week's?
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Just one week. So I guess week’s.
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Next question, will Solar sleep with anyone whose name isn't tagged?
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Actually yes, I have quite a number mares I’d like to do a chapter with. Once I was done with the mane 6, I was gonna leave it to my readers to decide on who was next, so if you’ve got any suggestions I’d like to hear them.
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Hmm. Are only characters in Equestria allowed?