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Israel Yabuki

Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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Ah, so this is the story that you were talking to me about yesterday.

Well I have to say, fics like this certainly help calm down after causing the enemies in front of me to scream in pain, the sound echoing around the stadium and the only other sound being their hand slapping against the mat in submission. The Details are very good and it may seem a bit slow if you're on a time crunch, but the pacing is good. I did like this.

8 out of ten Socko's from me.

Great fic and to all to come.

A idea for the last day of the potion effect, the Princess's setup an orgy and all four use an enhancing spell of him but it effects the potion as well, making it More potent (per spell) and makes it Permanent after the forth is cast?

Great Story Friend Cant wait for the Next Chapter:twilightsmile:

Pretty good so far! Nice touch having Rarity and Sweetie Belle at the same time, and then a shower scene with Twilight. Very nice. Only thing is, and forgive me for saying this, but Ace kinda comes across as a little too perfect for my taste. Seriously, everything about him is just so ideal, it kinda makes him boring. But that’s my only complaint. The rest is good, and I can’t wait for more.

Great story pls keep update it

This was a beyond awesome beginning I hope he bangs both Princesses and the other CMC including Babs.

You know I have a doubt at the end the girls will end up falling in love with ace I say it from twilight about that flash and the way he likes it and zecora also will fuck her

she never did it with flash because he's not her type.

OK, didn’t expect Cozy Glow. Why her though? Celestia was in the chapter, why couldn’t Ace have banged her? Normally I can’t Stand Cozy Glow. The other villains had something about them that made them intriguing, but Cozy was just annoying. So sorry but that was a bit of a turn off for me. Hope the next one is someone better.

Great work keep it up

Great chapter keep update pls

awesome keep up the great work u do

Sometimes, you gotta save the beloved ones for later. And besides, the commissioner wanted me to add Cozy to the story as well and I wanted to get her chapter over and done with as quick as possible

I don't blame you one bit for wanting to be done with her fast. Almost anyone's better than her.

This was a fun and interesting chapter I hope Chrysalis is next.

excellent work and I will repeat my question perhaps also will Ace fuck girls like ember, zecora, gilda starlight, sunset, trixie and shadow tempest

He gave me a list of who he wants his OC to bang, so try not to be too disappointed

ok if you can't with some you can tell me the names of those who can't be with ace

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