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An Intricate Disguise
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An Intricate Disguise
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I'm... not entirely sure what I just read, but it was certainly entertaining.
This is the hottest fucking thing that I've ever read, period.
You know, I have said this many times in my life, but I have never meant it as much as I do at this moment...
I have the most confused boner right now...
The humor in this felt far too mean spirited for the fluffy story I came in expecting.
"God, if this isn't the year I write smut, I don't know what I'll do."
-some repulsive lemur, some time ago
"oH No"
-Aristotle, 1776
Credit where it’s due, I think that might be one of the most concentrated attempts at breaking brains I’ve come across.
What did I just read?
This is fucking amazing XD
Are you sure anonpencil didn't write this?
Because It's giving me some SERIOUS Pencil vibes and I LOVE it! X'D
uwu
It's been a while since I added a story to my favorites.
I wanna like this, but with the title, I came in expecting Douglas Adam's kind of humor, which is er, shall we say, unorthodox, which may be part of the reason I feel the way I do, and may be a little unfair to you two. (It was around here, after writing the paragraph below, that I had an epiphany, which is that this story, rather than Douglas Adam's weirdness and occasional nonsense, this felt like a fairly "normal" crack-fic, and I was thus quite disappointed in the both of you, since I know you can do better. You even used CaptainPugeMuffin art! For shame! anyway...)
I'm no critic, so take this with a pinch of salt, but while you certainly captured the random/wackiness of Douglas, I didn't really feel like it was funny. Some of the jokes were hard to follow/didn't make sense(or I didn't get the reference/commentary), but plenty did and were obvious, such as 42, which, has several pages of buildup and smaller jokes, but the main one is these guys waited 10 million years to try and find out "The Ultimate Question of Life, the Universe, and Everything," and it's 42. A fuckin' number. Or when the protagonist starts to fly, because he was distracted as he fell, and gravity just ignored him. Or that poor guy who kept on getting killed, which was part of a setup for one of the best Brick Jokes I've ever read. Point being, (as I said earlier), this didn't really feel like it was comedy.
TL:DR
I wanna like it, but I came in with certain expectations, and got what felt a lot like a crackfic.
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the main one is these guys waited 10 million years to try and find out "The Ultimate Question of Life, the Universe, and Everything," and it's 42.
Not to nitpick, but ... Actually, they waited that long to find out the answer to the Ultimate Question. The problem is that they don't know what the question is, so the answer of 42 is meaningless.
There are so many ridiculous lines and running gags here, but this one is my favorite.
Dash in the photo looks like a Pokemon,
Wth?! XD
Seems legit.
"Is he friggin’ serious?” Rainbow droned. “Did we summon the one reptilian transdimensional acolyte who hails from Texas?”
“Pffft.” Twilight rolled her eyes. “Next thing you know, he’ll tell us we’re not allowed to own more than six dildos in a single household.”
I don't have a single fucking clue what's going on but this part made me laugh at least so I'll give it an upvote