I'm... not entirely sure what I just read, but it was certainly entertaining.

This is the hottest fucking thing that I've ever read, period.

You know, I have said this many times in my life, but I have never meant it as much as I do at this moment...

I have the most confused boner right now...

"God, if this isn't the year I write smut, I don't know what I'll do."
-some repulsive lemur, some time ago

"oH No"
-Aristotle, 1776

Credit where it’s due, I think that might be one of the most concentrated attempts at breaking brains I’ve come across.

This is fucking amazing XD
Are you sure anonpencil didn't write this?
Because It's giving me some SERIOUS Pencil vibes and I LOVE it! X'D

I wanna like this, but with the title, I came in expecting Douglas Adam's kind of humor, which is er, shall we say, unorthodox, which may be part of the reason I feel the way I do, and may be a little unfair to you two. (It was around here, after writing the paragraph below, that I had an epiphany, which is that this story, rather than Douglas Adam's weirdness and occasional nonsense, this felt like a fairly "normal" crack-fic, and I was thus quite disappointed in the both of you, since I know you can do better. You even used CaptainPugeMuffin art! For shame! anyway...)

I'm no critic, so take this with a pinch of salt, but while you certainly captured the random/wackiness of Douglas, I didn't really feel like it was funny. Some of the jokes were hard to follow/didn't make sense(or I didn't get the reference/commentary), but plenty did and were obvious, such as 42, which, has several pages of buildup and smaller jokes, but the main one is these guys waited 10 million years to try and find out "The Ultimate Question of Life, the Universe, and Everything," and it's 42. A fuckin' number. Or when the protagonist starts to fly, because he was distracted as he fell, and gravity just ignored him. Or that poor guy who kept on getting killed, which was part of a setup for one of the best Brick Jokes I've ever read. Point being, (as I said earlier), this didn't really feel like it was comedy.

TL:DR
I wanna like it, but I came in with certain expectations, and got what felt a lot like a crackfic.

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the main one is these guys waited 10 million years to try and find out "The Ultimate Question of Life, the Universe, and Everything," and it's 42.

Not to nitpick, but ... Actually, they waited that long to find out the answer to the Ultimate Question. The problem is that they don't know what the question is, so the answer of 42 is meaningless.

Dash in the photo looks like a Pokemon,

Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, Twist, and Babs Seed—completely aged up and legal—sat huddled in a frost-covered cave, clad in military gear with post-apocalyptic armaments. While polishing their guns and rotating slabs of radroach meat over an open flame, they listened intently as a thoroughly-scarred Rainbow Dash with a mohawk, stitches, and two eyepatches sat proudly before them, orating a grandiose tale of yesteryear.

Seems legit.