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This story is a sequel to In Need of a Break
Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy? Working together at Sugarcube Corner and Fluttershy's new business as a animal care-taker.
Applejack and Rarity? Traveling through all of Equestria together.
What could Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle could do?
Edited by, you guessed it, Krickis. Thanks again, buddy!
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I didn't know you were going to start the next story so soon.
6750702 Yeah, me neither... I really wanted to start writing this story sooner, though
6755589 Thanks!
Peekaboo! Guess who?
Cuddling?
YYYYYEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYYYYYYY
I liked it
I liked it a lot
6766348
Thanks!!!
6766634 it's always a pleasure. :^D
Needs spelling corrections but other than that it's a very nice story keep up the good work!
7026384 Thanks! And don't worry, it's going to be edited!
Hey I'm a PJO fan and I didn't catch the reference can you tell me what it is?
“No need to insist,” Rainbow said, patting her belly. “I’m hungry as a horse!”
...so it's just a normal hunger for you?
7412669 Hey, sorry for the long wait, I found myself with no time to come here.
About the reference, it was something I threw in the story just for fun because of the similarities between TwiDash and Percabeth, but it was before I edited the story. I decided to cut it out because I knew that not many people would actually get it. I don't really remember it, since it's been a really long time since I wrote this, but I think it was something like Twilight calling RD "featherbrain" as a reference to "seaweed brain". I just forgot to take that off the author's note.
7868754 Nice one!
But they are ponies, and horses are bigger then ponies, so I guess it makes sense
7874725 very true, very true...
Okay. I'll give you this. You improved a lot with this one. Your delivery still needs tweaking but overall it was better than the first two. There are still some typos and grammar errors you need to work on. But most of all I'd like an explanation behind this whole "Special Somepony Ornament" thing.
You got the right idea buddy.
This feels a bit rushed.
From just flying to getting in the same bed in a day is too rushed.