Hello everyone, today I have some sad news about this story that ultimately needs to be discussed. You see this story is a complete mess, this story was a Test story that I created and honestly never expected for it to take off like it did. I designed this story solely to field test my skills and as such it's riddled with contradicting plot lines and half finished plot hooks that make it completely broke in terms of a cohesive and consistent story. As such I'm going to be doing what I did with my first ever story, Return of the Reaper of Life.
For those unaware Return of the Reaper of Life was my first story ever posted on this site and had severe problems that forced me to put it on hiatus shortly after finishing the first arc of the story however despite the hiatus status I've been editing it in the background as a sort of side project and it has proven to be a rather successful venture. So now I will be doing the same to this story. I plan tp clean the old chapters up and redo the entire story so that is is more cohesive and makes a far better over all narrative.
Now since this story is going into Hiatus I will not be adding any new chapters until the rewrite is completed. This could be a rather long time as there are a lot of chapters and I will be editing ever single one of them. I sincerely apologize for the disappointment this will bring but I hope that you will return once the story receives a updated and more organized story that is befitting the viewership that it has received.
Thank you all for your support of this story and I hope to see you all in a future chapter.
Sincerely,
Walter D. Arceaion
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I understand you want to make this story good
Ok
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This is YOUR story so what we say doesn't matter at all, but do what you believe is right for the story and know that we will love in whatever the condensing it is in, old or new.
Hey, if you wanna redo it, I understand. There's actually a story of mine that I wanted to fix, so I made a rewrite and stumbled on a plot line that I felt was much better than what I was originally going with. The most interesting thing about writing is when you go back over your story and look at it from an outside perspective, you find many different ways you could've done better. It's hard to see problems while you're in the middle of writing it, but easy when you take the time to actually look at it without Author's biased. I look forward to coming back to this story in the future.
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Spiitting facts lol
Aw.
How's the rewrite coming along? Just curious
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It's going well, I've got the first few chapters properly edited and redone so they now fit the new direction I plan to take this. It will still be awhile before any work is seen however as I'd like to at least get it completely re-edited before anything is posted.
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Alright, that makes sense
wait so.... whats the ETA of the compleation of the redo?
Any news?
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Mostly the to be expected, 2021 was a bad year and what work I did on my stories was not enough to do anything with. I'm hoping that 2022 goes better and I can work on my stories once more but that remains to be seen.
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Sigh..... Ok Here's To Hoping.
more chapters
update it
do more chapters
you finish those rewrites yet?