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Arceaion


Greetings, my name is Walter D. Arceaion former <Redacted> of <Redacted>. I was a Human till I accidentally shattered myself across Time and Space.

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Once upon a time a person died living a good life, when they died they were was given a second chance but didn't want it. Too bad they didn't have a choice in that matter but at the last moment they used their second chance to bring me back.

I am Chara Dreemurr, Princess of the Underground, Wife of Frisk Aster, and I will fix the mistakes of the past. I will protect my Family and bring back the Monsters, even is the price for such a thing is my corrupted and blackened soul.

Descriptions edited 9/16/2019 to better suit the story.
Tags will be added or removed as necessary.
Story Cover Image changes to reflect the state of the story so expect it to change often.

Story Featured 10/15/2019

Chapters (36)
Comments ( 690 )

the rules. With knife in hand
they played the part of the fool.
the child gave them advice
they chose Genocide

Go ahead, just hit me since you're able...šŸŽ¼

Intersting as a fan of some of your other works i will be watching this

Comment posted by theoldhunter deleted Oct 26th, 2018

In a bit, Chara could RESET the world sans the PLAYER's control, and go on a pacifrisk run

Is this another Chara displaced I see!? Yay I'm not the only one!

Frisk should be given a chance, they too were not in control. Also, another great Undertale fic has appeard! Sunny gives this ten ducks out if ten.:duck::duck::duck::duck::duck::duck::duck::duck::duck::duck:

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There will be more, I'm working on the next chapter now actually.

really? end?
all but their dead?
oh come on!
not everyone is dead. there is one ... but it is erased ...
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slowed down
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very slowed...
paralovania (Gaster theme) slowed down

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Smart, I think you will like what comes next.

Wow great story so far especially the inclusion of dr gaster I almost never see him included after the accident.

GOD FU**ING DAMN IT CELESTIA! Murphy is going to destroy you guys now! :facehoof:

Celestia laughed. "It's alright Luna, honestly what could go wrong?"

Murphy's law has awoken

Celestia laughed. "It's alright Luna, honestly what could go wrong?"

Oh, hello, Murphy! How long have you been standing there? Since the prologue? Oh... Welp, not my fault when shit goes down...

I can hear Murphy evil laugh from there

Do they know something about friendship?
let them go to school of friendship
talk with twilight.
with her friends.
get to know each other be

let's get acquainted with the mane 6

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:facehoof: You're 1000 years to early for that, I need some 'slice of life' scenarios that will be happening before Luna was Nightmare Moon.

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Hold on a second here, 1000 YEARS EARLY!? When you said it was in the past?

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It's too early for the Main 6 seeing as they are almost 1000 years in the future. At present Chara and Asriel are 973 years bnm*. This means that they have a long time before they can meet Twilight and the others.

*bnm means Before Nightmare Moon.

DELTARUNE
DELTARUNE
DELTARUNEDELTARUNEDELTARUNE!
D.E.L.T.A.R.U.N.E
add characters Kris, Susie, Ralsei!

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Eh, I might later but for now Delta Rune will not be in the story.

Celestia laughed. "It's alright Luna, honestly what could go wrong?"

Should the comments list the ways this could south?


good update

This is getting more exciting as the story keeps going :pinkiehappy:! Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:!

This is getting better and better, the second half was even almost a 'slice of life' well done :twilightsmile:

I think frisk should be brought back and be free.

.....I want to see her go ARBITER on the nobles.

"No reason really, I'm just board." The figure said.

I believe you mean

"No reason really, I'm just bored." The figure said.

"This is all finally new, we're moving forward. But I'm tired, so vary tired."

I believe you mean

"This is all finally new, we're moving forward. But I'm tired, so very tired."

I've only used it once and it was in a small does so I don't know what it's capable of.

"She ashed as the knife transformed again only this time it was a sword.

I believe you mean

I've only used it once and it was in a small dose so I don't know what it's capable of.

And

She asked as the knife transformed again only this time it was a sword.

Chara was said to be a demon due to her extremely pail skin and red eyes however we now know this to be signs of Albinism meaning they have no pigment in their bodies.

Chara was said to be a demon due to her extremely pale skin and red eyes however we now know this to be signs of Albinism meaning they have no pigment in their bodies.

However I relive the answer dose not lie in the Underground but rather here on the surface."

However I realize the answer does not lie in the Underground but rather here on the surface."

Celestia and Luna stared at Chara in shock as she simply stat in thought before turning back to her food.

Celestia and Luna stared at Chara in shock as she simply sat in thought before turning back to her food.

Luna sighed and nodded. "Vary well, We agree to these terms though I am curious about something.

Luna sighed and nodded. "Very well, We agree to these terms though I am curious about something.

Sorry about my long comments. Feel free to delete them after fixing potential mistakes.

"If we went all out then their wouldn't be a forest around."

"If we went all out then there wouldn't be a forest atound."

"Chara and I were raised during a time when a human evasion was feared.

"Chara and I were raised during a time when a human invasion was feared.

"They were the ones to design this test actually as a way to change themselves."

I think you mean

"They were the ones to design this test actually as a way to challenge themselves."

"Yeah, it's weird but aside from being rude and raciest to any other species they are perhaps the most peaceful race I've seen aside from Monsters."

"Yeah, it's weird but aside from being rude and racist to any other species they are perhaps the most peaceful race I've seen aside from Monsters."

Princess, While finding my old lb and reviving monsters still takes Priority I would like for you to look at the device Sans created.

Princess, While finding my old lab and reviving monsters still takes Priority I would like for you to look at the device Sans created.

"Vary well, I will not tell."

"Very well, I will not tell."

This story shows promise

There are a few times when you used cloth instead of clothes towards the end as well as using flask instead of flash.

Hope the Princess's don't ruin things with ignorance.

Will you write one chapter that is not related to the original one? At least one ... Or a separate story? You must understand what I mean ... CHAOS CHAOS !!! A CAN DO ANYTHING !!! This is interesting experiment.

I think you misspelled Chara's last name. I'm not sure, though.

"Seriously, you are such a crybaby Chara" said

small typo

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Nope, I spelled it right. It's spelled weird isn't it?

Celestia laughed. "It's alright Luna, honestly what could go wrong?"

weal you have just fucked up it is never ok to say this
DOOOOOOM

Celestia laughed. "It's alright Luna, honestly what could go wrong?"

Hello ladies and gentelmen and welcome to tonights showing of everyones favorite game show, WHEEL! OF! MURPHY!

Raciest bigot

Remove the 'e'.

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