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jjb0420


Hello, I'm jjb, or the Traveler. These will be my first fan-fictions, and I hope you can join me and enjoy the ride. Thank you, and as Asriel once said, 'Don't Kill and Don't be Killed, Alright?'

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Hi, my name is Asriel Dreemurr, I died helping my sister, was brought back as a flower, was SAVEd by another, then sent to another world..........wait what?!

After being SAVEd by Frisk for the 5th time in a pacifist run, a portal opened up under Flowey, placing him inside Equestria near Fluttershy's house back as Asriel. Will he find his family again, will he see Frisk, and what is this mysterious reality shaping power coming from?

First Person Perspective- Will be using words like I and say/says

Nyx Belongs to Pen Strokes' story Past Sins https://www.fimfiction.net/story/41596/past-sins

I will bring other characters from Undertale in later on, as well other OC's I create later down the line, or OC's I should bring in that deserve some more love, all credit to those characters of course.

Secret Displaced Story, send me a message if you're curious.

If you don't want any spoilers to Undertale or its characters, wait to read until you either play, or watch it.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 151 )

i like it and when asriel and his family finally get back to home to where their belong, will asriel stay as a goat or turn back into flowey, that is to say if their ever do make it back home

...Wait, I thought you didn't fight Flowey in the pacifist run.

7792747 You fight Nightmare Flowey as the final boss of the pacifist run first time through, and you fight Asriel as the FINAL final boss of your second run. Now I want to see a fan fic about Flowey meeting Luna and talking about their times as misguided villains nearly destroying the world. GODDAMMIT BRAIN, NOW I WON'T BE ABLE TO GET IT OUTA MY HEAD!!!!!!!:pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by jjb0420 deleted Aug 22nd, 2017

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I forgot to include Photoshop Flowey in the story, sorry. And you see dream1990, the portals don't have a complete explanation, so they might just be a one-way trip. But don't worry, I'll slowly bring more of the other Monsters into the story as I go along, and after all.............it is Azzy's destiny to protect his new family, and Equestria.

Comment posted by dream1990 deleted May 30th, 2018

This is off to a great start:eeyup:

But i must say that at firat this was very clear, tge very confusing, clear again, confusing and then clear at the end:applejackconfused::applejackunsure:

Took some time to understand it all:twilightblush:

Uuhh..... this chapter turned to bit of a clusterfuck..... is this what i need to expect going forward? Because if it is, then i need to go slower:applejackconfused:





And also prepare myself for all the laughs i'm sure to get:rainbowlaugh:

This just keeps getting more and more confusing..... so many ponies and people from so many places:applejackconfused:

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Sorry If this gets confusing, I'll try to slow down once Riku, Kairi, Mickey, DJ, and Jason are brought in.

Great story so far likeing it and favoriting it as well keep up the good work :raritywink:

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I had Asriel say he knew about other gods, so it wouldn't make sense if I didn't include Bill. Besides, I really like Gravity Falls at the moment, later..........(in season 2 maybe).............i'll bring in the Pines family.

Oh yeah! I LOVE gravity falls, too. I have it recorded on tv, every single episode!

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I eventually will, it takes time, and I might add them soon..........who knows, I might add Mickey, or Riku!

i love this story, please more.:twilightsmile: (question, are you gonna put other version of undertale like ink sans or underswap for exemple) and what happen to xemnas

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I'm thinking about other AUs, just difficult since there's so many that I like. Also, I'll use Xemnas again soon, I had focused on the story more.

Hey! I don't think you included error sans, FellSans, or Dancetale! I'd like to see any of them in, you're really good at including other characters!

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Like I said to byakura, I'm thinking about adding more AUs, there's just a lot that I like.

*screams for a hour* ok... I think that was a new sans, probably another AU, and you even said Pokemon? Oh yeah! And bill finally joins, you have raised my ceriosity, keep on going!

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Yeah that was a reference to Camila's Glitchtale youtube series, Betty's from it too, along with the black and pink SOUL colors.

Great Chapter i loved it keep up the good work :raritywink:

Hey everypony, I'm glad you've been enjoying the story so far!

After a lot of consideration...........I've come to a tough desicion, In the latest chapter I'm typing out, the Author has decided to create the Editors. So, I've decided as said Author to private message select people to help the Monsters out, as well as help ME with the story, since I'm not always here to write it out.

Now, I'll send ground rules to each person I trust, so they don't abuse it. If said people do abuse it, I'll change the password, and wont bestow this privilege again.

Thanks, and

Stay Pony My Friends!

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Man those are some MEATY chapters right there, gonna make an evening of this story.

Secondly, have you ever tried using Google Docs for editing?

Keep the actual editable link to yourself, and send your editors the suggestion link, that way they can still comment and point out any mistakes or weaker points, while you don't have to worry about them replacing entire chapters with 20,000 repetitions of the word "dick" in a fit of drunken pique.

Before I read it, what is the Dark tag for?
And how bad does it get ?

why is this in the Steven universe group folder?

Why the hell did this get posted into the Kingdom hearts group?

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One, if you had read the whole thing you would've seen that Sora and his enemies are in this.

Two, the Gems and Sans/Steven are in it too, hence Steven Universe.

Three, the dark tag is for the buttercup incident, and future content i'm planning.

Why is this on hiatus? Oh well NM this was a good chapter! I have never ever seen the author in any book or doing this at all! Good job!

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hehe, thanks. i'm working on where they went as we speak. HOPE, you can give it the same amount of love, rather than LOVE!:twilightblush:

Oh my GOD!!!!:flutterrage: This pony racism is killing me inside.:applecry:

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One, I did way too good of a job on that.

Two, not all of them are racist, the Mane Six stop after meeting them.:twilightsmile:

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Frisk isn't gender specific, I picture them as a girl.

7947286 when this is off hiatus, try adding characters from the fire emblem game. Mostly the awakening and fates series.

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I don't play Fire Emblem so I don't know the characters, sorry.

But since you mentioned games, i'll be adding pokémon and more Kingdom Hearts characters to both stories soon enough!

Also, I'm gonna open my story to Displaced stories soon, so be ready for Jason, Alduin, and all the goodies!.

I'm sorry, but sonic x mlp is one of the worst crossovers in my opinion xD

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That's your opinion. As long as you don't rage I'm okay with it, but I'm still going to use them.:ajbemused:

I almost feel as if it was purposeful to say "Girls and Spike". I mean that in a funny way :trollestia:

God dammit! This story took a full on reverse course, straight into the shitter.:twilightangry2:
I was ok with everything until this chapter.

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