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WARNING: If you did not play the game Undertale (both endings), you will be VERY confused.

Frisk made many mistakes for doing the genocide route in her timeline. But as if by miracle, she was sent to another world before making the worst choice ever. Will she be able to learn from her mistakes and start a new with a happier end?

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Finally someone is not affraid to give her some sort of gender, I just have seen many pitcures, or storys where even the character looks like they wanted to fuse both in once, or even make him genderless.
i don´t really care that much about it, but only because they give us the choice to see him as both, I´m not exactly sure if that was supposed to mean that the creator meant that we have to look at him as genderless. Long story short, I believe he just wanted to give us the choice to be a boy, or girl in this story, and that was the most easy way.

Oh and I´m going to read it tomorrow, just wanted to say that.

6823744 I'm pretty sure Toby Fox didn't spell it out for immersion purposes, like you said. One of his tweets even said you should name the "Fallen Child" after you, so I imagine immersion was probably the reason for ambiguous gender as well. Other people just like to see it differently, to very varying degrees. Besides, it's definitely a lot easier to write when you can use a set pronoun.

Anyway, I think this story is off to a good start.

6824661 It could be that I understand it not correctly right now, but I say it anyway, It is a bit weird for me if you mean that he really wanted him to be genderless.

Either that or you actually agreed with me him being generless in the story, so it could be written easier. Even if it sounds different, I have nothing against the genderless thing, I just don´t see the point in it if it should be true that it is meant like that.

Well like you said, I don´t think that talk would get us anywhere, so I start to read it today.

6825383 I was agreeing that Toby Fox intentionally chose not to mention Frisk's gender for the sake of player immersion. Nowhere is it ever mentioned or even hinted at that Toby intended Frisk to be genderless, agender, ect. That was all from fans (at least as far as I know of).

For the second part, I was just meaning it was a good idea for the author of this story to choose a gender and role with it, since this isn't a first person story.

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I was agreeing that Toby Fox intentionally chose not to mention Frisk's gender for the sake of player immersion.

ahhh okay either I didn´t understood you, or we had spoken about two different things. Sorry that I make it so confuse, but yes that was what I meant too.

Nowhere is it ever mentioned or even hinted at that Toby intended Frisk to be genderless, agender, ect. That was all from fans (at least as far as I know of).

and thank you again, I agree with that too. I ask my teacher to show me a few english books to learn my grammar a bit better, she was agreeing with me, that I can´t just get better because of reading.

For the second part, I was just meaning it was a good idea for the author of this story to choose a gender and role with it, since this isn't a first person story.

okay sorry I get the feeling you was agreeing with me from the start, and I just didn´t understood exactly what you meant.

Interesting is all I can say. Nice chapter by the way! I like how you portrayed it.

Have some pancakes!

*throws pancake in authors face*

hhhhhmmmmm I can´t say anything about it right now, the first chapter was okay so far, but right now I don´t know what to think.

6830821 rather good right now.

Canonically wrong for sure.
Chara does not murder everyone for frisk, the most you can say to keep frisk blameless is to blame the player
either way Chara makes it clear:

I am Chara.
Thank you.
Your power awakened me from death.
My “human soul.” My “determination.”
They were not mine, but YOURS.
At first, I was so confused.
Our plan had failed, hadn’t it?
Why was I brought back to life?
…You.
With your guidance.
I realized the purpose of my reincarnation.
Power.
Together we eradicated the enemy and became strong.
HP. ATK. DEF. <
GOLD. EXP. LV.
Every time a number increases
that feeling…
That’s me.
“Chara”

It's the player or Frisk who has given chara the inspiration to become a monster. Its they who gave frisk the strength.

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Well technically none of this is canon :trollestia:

6857631
it's less about your creativity and more about the tendency genocide runners have to disown their actions through a little scapegoat in the shape of a human hating child.

6893332

okay

1. I see what you did there. :trollestia:

2. I do realize what it actually is, but it's kinda hard to put that kind of element in the story for me.

this works in a comic form not so much a written form. nice try but there is only so much you can do with something so cliche.

6918754 so i think it is good in written form

6918759 well ok that's fine i hope you enjoy this as it progresses, its just i can see where this is going and that bores me. like i said its cliche i have seen it before and i have no interest in seeing it again.

“For starters, your souls could be linked to one another. Should one of you die, so shall the other.”

I am pretty sure that humans in Undertale don't need their soul too survive. In Undertale, you need a soul to live but not to live.

Awesome Story So Far... i wonder how it will *pan* out...

bad jokes aside can't wait too see more...

now i better go before the pan crazed f2p bfb using scouts get this poor plushie...

*Flees From Comment Section*

well i didn't disapear i was in my house and when everything went black outside i just closed the shutters XD

so YAY NAPSTABLOOK

Comment posted by shadowstar618 deleted Mar 3rd, 2016

Is Sans or any of the others gonna pop up?
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Ugh...my head...
you're pulling a Pacifist Judgement Hall Sans, except without the convenient capital letters

...SANS WHAT HAVE YOU DONE

WARNING: If you did not play the game Undertale (both endings), you will be VERY confused.

both endings

both endings

Look, bruv, love, whatever you are, you need to get with the times.

There are FOUR Endings (or six, depending on how you look at it.

You have Pacifist.

True Neutral.

Genocide.

And NO MERCY.

NO MERCY has three parts, and is capitalized for a reason.

WARNING: SPOILERS AHEAD! DO NOT READ IF YOU HAVE NOT BEATEN PACIFIST, TRUE NEUTRAL, AND GENOCIDE!!!

After completing Pacifist, True Neutral, and Genocide, Undertale completely annihilates the Fourth Wall, and will NOT allow you to play the game... Unless you sell your SOUL to a mass-murdering maniac who will kill every single living thing on planet earth, just for shits and giggles. Regardless of what Route you choose, everybody dies. Poof. The end. You have to go through a TRUE RESET (or, ya know, completely removing all Undertale data from your computer manually) if you want to save anybody. NO MERCY consists of the three original routes, but altered.

6935924 so that's 2 things that you avoided happening to you by closing the shutters. asriel absorbing the souls of every monster in the underground. and the world...being...erased. i guess i understand how you avoided the asriel thing considering you don't have a soul. do you i mean you are a ghost. but how did you avoid the ENTIRE WORLD getting erased?

6828150 Catches them. "No, he must have cookies. Much more better than pancakes, or even waffles."

Pictured Frisk as the Frisk from piemations animation.

LET THE HILLS RUN RED WITH THE BLOOD OF THE INNOCENT!

Well, on the plus side it looks like Chara's been brought back down to human, and not... you know, demon of powerleveling and growing numbers that can 1-shot an entire universe. That wouldn't be pretty to have in Equestria.

Where in the world is Celestia getting THIS kind of power from?

Am I the only one who is hearing this right now?

7518510 :rainbowderp: The ability to overpower someone who literally 1-shots the universe and then puts it back together strikes me as something that could've come in handy during the Tirek incident.

“Heh, the old whoopee cushion in the hand trick. Never gets old.”

you know at the start of the chapter I wanted to say, why not trowing them all in, than just one by one.....
sometimes I prefer it if not just one character after another is joining the story, since that usually kind of prevented me from learning more about the original character and stuff like that. (I would have to think about it to explain it better, but I don't have the time right now)

Whoever I was happy about Papyrus and I always like Toriel.


7518654 I would totally love it to have Chara and Frisk fighting together
(if their fighting should have that game effect, which maybe even prevents magic from interrupting), only to get somehow stopped before Cara can kill Sans (annoying dog?)
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and suddenly I'm kind of okay with them joining the story, but I still hope you keep a limit to that.


7518735 somehow I got the feeling that Celestia is going to be some sort of ridiculous strong overlord final boss. (for whatever reason).
I kind of agree, making a new world or whatever you meant would be a bit to much, even for her. (at least as long as it is the same Celestia from the show, but still if it would be another Celestia, I can hardly believe her having that power.)

nice chapter so far,

Birds were singing, and flowers were blooming.

doesn't sans say something like that that to Genocide!Frisk?

Sans don't do that, now the kids can justify killing you if you attack them.

Uh Sans does not look happy, is it due to him thinking that Frisk broke the promise of not resetting the world? (Not really resetting it though since Frisk had no control of the situation their in now, and it's not really resetting). Hope to see an update to see what happens and what Sans does and where everyone else is. :twilightsmile:

7518654 0:16
When you barge in on the kids who murdered you:trollestia:

7560301 NOT GONNA HAPPEN
FOR INOCENTS SHOULD NOT BE TOYED WITH!✋☞ ✌☠✡ ⚐☞ ❄☟☜☜?☜ ❄☟✋☠☝? ☟✌??☜☠ ❄☟☜ ☼✋✞☜☼? ?☟✌☹☹ ☼?☠ ☼☜? ?✋❄☟ ?☹⚐⚐? ?☟✋☹☜ ✡⚐?☼ ???❄ ☹✋❄❄☜☼? ❄☟☜ ☝☼⚐
GOT THAT YOU TWO?☠?
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OOOOOH CHARA JUST GOT DUNKED ON BY LUNA!

OHHH
GET SUPER DUNKED
WAIT SANS THE DIRTY BROTHER KILLER IS THE OTHER KID

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