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Arceaion


Greetings, my name is W. D. Arceaion former <Redacted> of <Redacted>. I was a Human till I accidentally shattered myself across Time and Space.

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There once was a pony who could forge magic, not magic items but but Magic Cores. This is the story of the Magic Smith.

This was a one shot but popular demand asked for more so I will be posting more. This was simply an idea that popped into my head and I had fun writing it. I hope you enjoy.

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Comments ( 21 )

Hmmm. A past version of Twilight that could fix magic cores. I can see it. Wonder if Present day Twilight is a descendant or a reincarnation of the smith.
Would be interesting to see Twilight awakening to the powers the Smith had when she stumbles across the ancient hammer.

I really liked this one off. It has simple origins but much to unpack. It’s a tale of only one stallion but there is much more deeply embedded in the characters and the story. Choked me up near the end. Good story and good writing.

This is very similar to this not sure if it's a coincidence or not

9331518
I was going for reincarnation, and if this is continues then yes Twilight will regain this ability. However there can be no story without conflict.

9331529
It was meant to be simple, more often than not I spend more time creating the setting and planing the story out that it gets to complicated or I turn it into a giant project. The best example of this was my Returning Home story. It took off way to fast.

9331531
The original comic was actually the inspiration for this, I actually bought a copy of it I enjoyed it so much. I didn't know it was dubbed though, cool.

9331561
Well I'm happy to have shared it with you but I personally think it's a little to close to the original but as is it's got enough differences to stand out

continue? please.:fluttershysad:

9331563
I've been getting a lot of people wanting it to continue so what similarities and such will be wiped away if I do a chapter two. When I started to write this I wanted the first chapter to to follow the same plot as the comic so I could toy with it later. I have a lot of ideas for this story but I'm hesitant to do more.

9331694
Make sure it's no little foal in a hospital in the end

If this is a past life twilight bade or not it really good please update when u can i I would love to read more. So thanks for the alwsom story

9331718
I may be trapped in the void but I'm not some heartless monster.

9331777
Well good luck to you

awwww, this was a sweet one-shot :fluttercry:

9331534
True. I'd read a continuation of this.

Nice story

9331534
Why do people keep saying that? Conflict does not make a story good, or even worthwhile. Yes I do wan't to see more of this.

But there better be a 100% good reason for any conflict other than some delusion that it's required.

9333229
Conflict doesn't always mean battle or fighting, it simply means that there mist be something to progress the story. The conflict could be a simple argument or even a someone suffering from the past.

Interesting. Though I have to wonder what damages cores in the first place.

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I thought it would be like staining magic to a breaking point, there are a lot of fanfictions where unicorns experience something like magic burn out and I often wonder what would happen of somepony decided to push their magic in that kind of situation. Would they have there magic completely shattered, would they die or would something else happen?

Love the adaption from the heart smith, if you do decide to continue it, I'd keep reading. However I'm sure if it needs to be continued, I wouldn't have the foggiest idea of how to do so anyway.

Besides it's just a story.

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