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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

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Ok, so I agree with Spike. Goldron must meet Trixie. :trixieshiftright:

Hahahaha, oooh wow, that... that's good, this is good stuff so far! :yay: I am gonna enjoy this, I already like the way Peldric and Starlight interact, it's cute.

Good show Intricate, good show!

Stupid sexy ponies XD

When they arrived at the castle, Goldron knocked. A small congregation of ponies had gathered around the outside with us, scrutinising each of us and whispering excitedly. I could feel my heart beating a little faster than usual—it was always nice to feel noticed. I smiled at them. A few smiled back, and it made me happy to see.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::trollestia::trollestia:

Again, couldn't resist. Good start so far though. :twistnerd:

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I HAVE A PROBLEM OKAY.

But thank you.

God dammit, even Intricate is on the human x glimmer train.

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I didn't realise it was a train, but I'm happy to board it!

Who did the cover art?

Now that was a pretty fun beginning! Goldron is a prick of a high caliber, and what's worse, he seems to be quite competent (at least from the brief descriptions) so he kind of has a right to be a prick.

At least he's the amusing kind of, not one I immediately hate :rainbowlaugh:

Alright, I was hooked from your description, and this proved that it is definitely worth following!
Looking forward to more :twilightsmile:

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This dude: https://www.deviantart.com/mercurial64
Though he's way more active on his nsfw tumblr. Can't link it here for obvious reasons, but it's easy to find.

I think Goldron looks like this.
pbs.twimg.com/profile_images/616232841207226368/HzEuzRNE.jpg

If you know who this is you get double xp.

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Isn't that the fucker from the 2112 animation? I could be wrong.

I seriously had a dream last night in which you uploaded a new story, the dream was right.

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Martin Luther King would be proud.

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It most definitely needs to be longer.

Peldric was already habituated to weird sex: whenever Goldron summoned up a bunch of Succubi for an orgy, he'd always get the ugly ones.

Great! I'll lead the way then..." She began to walk, and Peldric followed after with a tense body, attempting not to let his eyes settle on any part of her for too long, especially not the tight, firm rump she sported.

Why am I already looking forward to another chapter based on that line alone?

Not much to say but, it was a nice intro at least for what could be some mutual relateable things they can share about their teachers as a base for communicating with each other to break the ice as it were, and shown a bit I guess.

I'm surprised Twilight didn't say anything about the way that wizard spoke to Starlight but there are pressing matters I suppose than to upset one who came to help with a great threat, which may or may not ever appear in this fic anyways. We'll see how this goes from here I guess.

Well, the moment I read "Gauldron the Wise and Magnificent", my mind immetiately jumped to Trixie the Great and Powerful. Would be hilarious.

Pel goes to the dark side.

Goldron: “Where did I go wrong?!”

Pel: “Really?”

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Celestia: "Pfft! I know, right? Students these days."

Sunset Shimmer: "Really!?"

Is the Devourer a reference to something specific? Personally the first thing that came to mind when I read this was Ninjago.

Any update on the next chapter?

Great work keep it up

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I was thinking Terraria and WoW

A good starlight shipfic, hooray! Hopefully doucheron gets devoured.

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I think even Trixie would hate him

Question what is the sex tag for is it for stuff that happens behind the scenes?

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If he's Fighting something Called THE DEVOURER
He's doomed

Anyone remember "Spectacular Spider-Man"? I wouldn't be surprised if Peldric goes the same route as old Otto Octavius after Norman Osborn treated him like crap....

⚡ *Zaps with defibrillator* ⚡
Live damn you, don't you die on me you bastard! *zap* Liiive!!

This is quite interesting. Can't wait to read more.

Posts 1 chapter. Puts it instantly on Hiatus. Urgh....

This one looks good. Haven't read the first chapter because I don't want to get depressed with the hiatus.

Cancelled :c

D-F

aw man! cancelled? we didnt even get to the clop, RIP...

"expect plenty in later chapters!"
>Cancelled
Or expect nothing, lmao

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