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And, with that, I blame Pinke.
Good luck with the story; I know that starting to write a new genre than what you're used to is hard.
Triple F, big excessive, innit? And if she's that big, how big is Celestia?
Not Bad, AU in which Dragons have conquered Equestria, Spike seems to be there caretaker/master. It also seems that Twilight did not become an Alicorn in this AU.
mmm.
mm..
Still, need more chapters.
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I have a few more written up, but I’m polishing them off a bit before posting
Thus far, this doesn't seem TOO bad. I've certainly seen worse "Dark Porn Worlds." Then again, the worst is probably yet to come.
Is Nail guarding Guru?
I can believe this dangerous dark weapon exist in this world. The Naked Apron needs to be taken out ASAP!
I would have love to hear what Pinke was going to say at the end of that sentence. Spike has siblings, Blueblood has been transform into a mare this is getting really interesting.
That sounds like a great side story for this story.
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"I saw a bird. It was pretty. Go kick it's ass."
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Precisely.
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I'm not entirely sure of that reference
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Dragon Ball Z Abridged.
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If it was, it was by accident. I just wanted to give them names that were similes of Spike
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I just don't get why people like breasts so big that they actually get in the way of you living your life. I'm talking breasts that account for about 65% of your body weight.
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To each their own, I guess.
This is interesting. The other Twilight and Pinkie coming to the canon world is going to be great. I can't wait to see how things are going to go for them. I mean it would be a massive culture shock to them. Even more so when the dragonlord isn't the being that he is in their world. I do hope that canon Pinkie and Twilight don't end up enjoying the world they are in now. It isn't a good world. It is slavery plan and simple. And a super fucked up one where they can just be forced to do whatever their masters tell them to do and they can't even fight back. They can be sexually assaulted and worse part I feel mentally they will still be themselves during the whole act even if their body is acting on its own. That is just cruel and that just shows how shitty that world is that something like THAT is the normal. I want them to leave or even start up a rebellion to change the world. But they can't become okay with how it is.
Spike needs to dominate someone
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That is planned for of the future chapters
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Which Spike are we talking about? Prime Spike or AU Spike?
I would have taught Prime Spike would be like the expert on AU's since he is always reading his Comic books. I do wonder if AU Twilight and Pinkie have different personalities, like how AU Rarity is really mean (Sugarcoating it).
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I feel like it a bit too soon for that on judging that AU world. We are not sure who started the war or as to why but like most would guess there is a really high chance that the Dragons were to blame (Maybe a twist it was the Princess or it was by a third party working on the background for either revenge or etc). Also, remember the Sci-fi rules of a Civilization conquering another Civilization, the Dragons could do by far worse, so it would seem this AU is rather better than others (also, we don't know much yet ). As for a rebellion, it would be great but it could also be bad.
Great Chapter!!!
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I was talking about the AU Spike
Also, who said anything about a war? Not once was any conflict of that nature mentioned. Just because a place was conquered doesn’t mean a war happened.
Okay well this was some interesting world building sure. I kind of would have liked something to progress the story a bit further sine this kinda feels like a filler chapter but oh well it happens sometime I guess lol.
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Sorry, I wasn't clear on who I was talking about since I tag them like this
Prime Spike - Younger Spike
AU Spike - Older Spike
Also, again sorry, usually when the use of the word conquered it usually means that there was a conflict in which one of the parties took the other by force. So most of the time people would presume that there was a war even when there was none.
Nice little chapter.
Some commenters on Derpibooru image 1789853 were talking about wanting to see a non-vore dragon domination setting. You might want to link to this there if you want more readers.
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image numbers don’t really help me, whenever I try searching those I get an error message. I find it more helpful to get the name of the work, rather than its image number
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Page 5 of Z-Book by SugarlessPaints. Not sure what error message you'd get or why, though.
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I keep getting this message on Derpibooru when I do number searches
I also get the same result when I search by the artist you named and “Z-Book”
It would probably be easier for you to just send me a link to the page over a PM at this point, seeing as searching similar parameters on e621 gets me almost the same results.
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I honestly have to agree with you there is something was Conquered that tends to mean it was taken by force even more so when there were ALREADY creatures leaving there. And it isn't like this is a equal society AT ALL. It is clear the Dragons rule over the ponies and they are submissive to the dragons. Even more than they they are branded with something that FORCES them to comply with them. So assume a war happen, and this was a hostel take over isn't far off at all. I was thinking the same thing personally.
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I’ll admit, I didn’t think through everything on this. But I do sort of like the idea of a war that resulted in the current state of things, and we all know that given his personality it’s a wonder Torch didn’t make a go at early Equestria in his younger days in the canon series.
This is a interesting aspect for sure. So with this change in detail you have made Celestia and Luna MUCH younger than they were in the canon. Which means that best chance when Spike came and took over Discord was still ruling most of the land. But that does bring up the question. How in the hell could Spike do ANYTHING to stop Discord. He is more or less a law of Nature in their world. The dragon's resistance to magic doesn't work on him. And he can't be killed so Spike should have had no way of stopping him. That also mean Spike best chance took over also when the three clans were at war with each other. But it is also SUPER sad to think that for thousands of years all of pony kind have been these really fucked up slaves to the dragons. I mean a whole species forced to serve another like this, and for so long many are just use to it. The amount that want to rebel and get their own freedom might be smaller than even I originally thought but I am sure they are out there. I worry tho that Spike's desire to rule might spread outside of not just ponies but all species. He is such a nice Hitler Dragon isn't he...... a bit to far.... but still not that far.
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I can only give an estimated guess on this, We are not sure if Discord was there or not, but if he was, then Spike would most likely have made a deal with the Princesses (maybe Discord, but it is not likely). He would help them and in return, they would be under his rule but given that many of the territories in Equestria were split among the Dragons (Dragon Lord took most or biggest), other Dragons who probably develop some type of superiority complex began to abuse them ponies or even worse. Spike may have realized what was happening so he probably set up this system in order to protect the ponies and made sure if there was an alicorn he would have made sure to keep her in his territory as is the safest so she couldn't be used for something really dangerous. That would probably be a few reasons as to why Spike is trying to bring all the other territories under one banner. Also, if he is able to bring all in one banner, he could raise the ponies status.
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I get that and that is a pretty good guess and I think fit with this story. I am just pretty itchy I guess when it comes to enslaving people or sentient things. I can't help but think how people would tell my great grandmother that her being a slave was for her own good, and that her learning to write or any skills beyond working the fields would only harm her. So I just can't help but think when I hear that the ponies serving the dragons is 'for their own good' to jump to that. When Spike has shown already that he doesn't respect Ponies fully by him giving them such sexual commands that they can't fight. But I will just separate that and say, it is their culture that the dragons have .... instilled in the ponies over their time as their.... noble lords. I am not trying to come off as a ass or anything REALLY, I really like the idea and really interested in seeing where this goes I just can't help but want to shout to the ponies to stand up, but at the same time I can put it in my mind that this is in a way a 'different' culture.
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I guess this is a bit of matter of perspective. I don't like slavery, but I don't mind it if its use as a form of punishment when a crime is committed (as long as it is not crazy abusive). I believe he respects them, but he is afraid or has to play a charade (or maybe he really loves ponies), for example, what if he is close to finishing with what he is working for but all the sudden ponies across his territories rise in rebellion, it would create panic everywhere it might be worse in the territories he was trying to bring in, those territories would probably punish the ponies or kill them. They would also instigate the rebellion, creating chaos within Spike's territory making it much more easy to take over or a third party can just bid its time waiting for both Dragons and Ponies to weaken each other so they themselves take over. For now, I can assume that Spike really cares about the ponies in his territory and maybe have romantic feelings towards the main 6, but as I have said, I can only assume.
It is not about it being a different culture but something that can change given enough time.
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In context, I’m trying to build Spike up as a dragon that both loves respects ponies, he has everything he does because of what ponies, and some of the other creatures, have been able to develop and create. Dragons tend to think in very short terms, despite their incredibly long lifespans and very limited vulnerabilities, but ponies, griffins minotaurs, diamond dogs, and various other creatures mostly have much shorter lifespans and a wider variety of vulnerabilities but actively have tendencies and histories of thinking in the long term and trying to make things more comfortable or convenient for those in the future, even if there is a very high possibility they will not get a chance to see some semblance of the future and/or ideals
they are working towards.
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In regards to Discord, I haven’t decided if he even came to this collection of territories that was once Equestria in the timeline of this universe, chances are just as likely he bypassed the whole thing out of some reason that could never be addressed. But you have to remember, Spike has only been Dragonlord for 300 years, before he won that title Torch had been Dragonlord for who knows how many hundreds or thousands or years. A dragon that old and powerful might be just powerful enough to find Discord’s magic more of a minor annoyance than anything pressing or overly distracting. And when the characters refer to dragon “cities” in terms of before Spike’s reign, it’s more akin really simple communities that had very low chances of any genuinely built structures, or anything resembling recognizable as genuine architecture. I think you’re adding digits where they don’t belong.
But yes, alicorns are exceedingly rare and after they were a recognized entity by dragons ruling what was once Equestria a mandate regarding alicorns only being permitted to be held by the Dragonlord was handed down almost immediately. So yes, all standing alicorns are in a special place within Spike’s domain. You’ll get to see them in a future chapter
This is interesting for sure. I think it is super telling that AU. Twi and AU. Pinkie instead of being.... well MORE shocked that in this world Ponies are their own thing and not submissive to dragons. In fact they have a alliance with the dragons and are on good terms with them. They care more about just getting back and doing their jobs, I think that just shows how deep their home culture is embedded into them. It does kinda make me a bit sad for them to be honest. Hell I am shocked they didn't even comment on the younger Spike they now have around them at the moment. I want them to hurry and get home, it is clear they want to go home and if they are content with their life than who is it to stop them from having it. I do worry what the dragon's might do if they find out about this AU. that is instead ran by the Ponies? Of course with how disorganized they seem to be and if they don't have their own Discord than I think the canon world doesn't have to worry about a invasion. And even so the canon world has a alliance with almost EVERY major species on the planet. That would be a VERY dangerous force to come up against.
Exacerbate, not exasperate.
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Thanks for that, the two sound similar and also seem to be similies to some degree. I’ll fix it as soon as possible
This is why you make Pinkie Pinkie promise to leave you alone during tests.
You lost with just how Twilight immediately fits in.
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I’m implying that Twilight and Pinkie, despite being from a very different universe, also happen to have the same sort of mannerisms as their counterparts. I’m trying to show it more than taking it and telling the readers.
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Like I was just makes the world shift useless.
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I’ll admit, I didn’t think a few things threw but I’m doing my best to rectify them in later and coming chapters.
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Concept is sound it's just that Twilight can easily fit in this new world instantly is the key point.
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And so can Pinkie, but I haven’t seen any of the readers draw attention to that.
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Because Pinkie is Pinkie
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And Twilight is Twilight, this a bit of a circular argument.
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No it 8sn'i expect her to try to figure things out but not that fast. Pinkie on the other hand breaks the fourth wall with ease
Seeing a lot of set up, but not a lot of anything happening.
Dear god the accent does not translate well into words