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the7Saviors


I am a self proclaimed grimdark and dark fantasy fic writer. You want darkness, death, and despair? You've come to the right place. Also an eternal Twilight Sparkle fan.

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Twilight Sparkle had a secret.

It was a secret that plagued her for years. It was a secret that isolated her. It was a secret that brought her pain, misery, and joy all at once.

It was a secret that gained her the best and only real friend she had ever known.

It was a secret that caused her downfall.

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Comments ( 29 )

Interesting how it's told as well, with no actual dialogue as such. Overall it's a nice little one shot.

Well that was haunting. Thanks, but I don't think I need to see how we got here. I believe you are entirely too good at this.

I wouldn't mind a prequel to this

I am loathe to admit it, but I would love to see the sequel/prequel to this. May Faust have mercy on my soul

Interesting tho i wonder how you would handle a sequel would Twlight and ocatavia be involved? Would it be more a prequel that lead up to this? Or something else entirely?

Nice job on this!
I definitely would be interested in more of this premise. You've been one of my favorite authors to write darker stories recently, and I believe that you could pull it off nicely.
Nice choice on Octavia actually, her stoic and upright demeanor could potentially make her terrifying in a prequel. :twilightsmile: (Music pones are also best pones)

You're quickly becoming one of my favorite authors in this genre.

i would love to be able to read more of this. if you have the time, could you gift us with more?

Gosh... I'm left wondering... I do wanna see what led up to this.

Great storytelling as always by the way! It left me on the edge of my seat!

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Thanks for the praise on the story, and my stories in general! :twilightsmile:

It might be awhile before I work on the sequel, but in the meantime you should check out the story that originally inspired me to write this one.

An intriguing story. Hoping to see more of it.

Why do I like this story so much? Every facet of every sentence intrigued me in a sickening way. I love this story. Take my upvote and enjoy insanity!

This needs a sequel

Please make a backstory.

BTW what does the bold text represent? Is it supposed to be some kind of emphasis or something?

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It represents another side of Twilight.

I would actually like to see a more in depth prequel or such to this.

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So is it like her extra evil side or her better side? :scootangel:đŸ˜ˆ

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I prefer to think of it as her 'fun' side.

I hope they survive in the sequel.

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Read it, loved it.

Really wanna know what happened, or how Octi got into yours.

I liked this. Characters being portrayed as serial murderers or something along those lines have always been a personal favorite of mine. That's one of the reasons why I like Death Note so much, honestly...

well damn this was rather interesting to read. loved the way it would told.

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what? seeing them come back from the dead? welli will admit, i had the image of twilights head poping off for some bizare reason but not dieing only being released and escapes with octavias corpse to be brought back by what ever dark magics that let her survive. ... my mind is weird

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I meant, right before they die from being hanged, some ponies came and rescued them. Then, they're on the run and escape to outside of Equestria's borders.

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Your mind went in an entirely different direction than mine did it seems. Lol

Oooh, now this is interesting.

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I like it.

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