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Orthoros


A guy from switzerland who likes cheese, mountains and horse words.... lots and lots of horse words.

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This story is a sequel to Divine Indifference


For over a thousand years Atlas had been holed up in a mountain, working tirelessly on the only way to save the planet Equus and himself from certain doom. Alas, an unexpected event throws all his plans out of the window. He is running out of time and needs to find a solution as fast as possible, or everything he fought for might just disappear into thin air.

As the revolutionary fight of the gods reaches its climax, Atlas is caught up in a race against time. He will have to work together with his old friends to pull off a miracle before it's too late.


Cover art by The Spirits Demise thank you very much!

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HECK YES HERE WE GO ANOTHER ONE OH BABY A TRIPLE LETS GO.

Ahem.

Proceed with the story forthwith. The penultimate book? We'll see how it holds up.

Can't wait :pinkiehappy:

i dont get it, isnt this the same prologue as the first story?

Dude you cheated. You had this exact same dialogue somewhere in the previous story or storys.

We’ve waited a long time for this and now I can’t believe that it’s here

Been waiting 10 months to see the continuation of this, I hope the waiting was worth it!

Also, I love how the names go;
"Entertainment", for when the Gods enjoyed the show at the start
"Indifference", shown when Death revealed that Zeus lost interest
And now, "Intervention", could mean Atlas' intervention in Zeus' plan, or Zeus' in the rebelling Gods

FINALLY !!!

Now where is their big brother?

I've got a strange feeling of deja vu

🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

8809021
I believe it was removed.
It wasn't

How does this have 21 likes yet 0 views...

8809056
MAGIC!!!! :trollestia:

Yahoo! Finally here!

Yay! the series continues. I always loved the first one so i was dying to see it come full circle.

Ah, the benefits(/weakness) of serialization. You can essentially repeat a prologue, and we readers benefit from the reminder. I can't wait to see this next chapter. :pinkiesmile:

8809056
How can one be on the Jedi Council but not a master?

Oh I can't wait for this. The ride has been fantastic and I've been looking forward to this moment for a while. This is going to be delightful.

I honestly cannot wait to see what happens next. Especially...

8809040
Oh yeah... I cannot wait for Big Brother to show up.

And another thing; I can't wait to see how certain events will change in the face of Atlas' presence. Especially the fact that Star Swirl is still banished with the other Pillars keeping the Pony of Shadows in check.

You got to reunite the bromance.

8809101
Orthoros isn't caught up with the cannon, he said that his story wouldn't reflect what happened in the newest seasons.

After all, the GOlden Oaks library,

So, the g and the o are capitalized. Other than that, let's get this show on the road!

LAME CLIFFHANGER IS LAME!:flutterrage:
But looking forward to this.

8809060
That makes sense in a really weird way....

*Excited/Frustrated Squeal* EEEEEEEUUUUAAAAAAAAARRRRGGGHHH!!!!~~
I HATE CLIFF-HANGERS!!!!

Stupid cliffhangers. I WANT MORE!

'clears throat'

MORE

SO MUCH EXCITEMENT :yay:
-explodes-

this is going to be a good story ark.
some how i have a feeling this is going to be a bumpy ride.

Greeks gods are the epitome of debauchery and depravity, petty immortals who cope with their insecurity by meddling in the affairs of mortals.
I hope they all die, non is worth sparing.

It finally ends, all that build up until that very moment where it all began, the moment I've been waiting and craving since the dawn of time...

Oh boy, this is going to be good. :pinkiehappy:

I have literally been waiting two whole books for the chapter after this one! I can't wait!!!!

It is awesome to see this.
On another note, I really like the cover art.

Yeah, one would forget the story that gave birth to it all in a thousand years... let's hope he remembers SOMETHING, at the very least.

Did I favourite this story before I even read the prologue?
Yes, yes I did.
Sue me.

8809165 It's basically the same thing but we get to see it from a different camera angle.

It's 1.15 am, and I'm still up reading. I need to wake up in little less than 5 hours. Anyone know good sleep medicines? I think I need them. On another note, YES! FINALLY WE ARE HERE. Now to wait for another chapter...

Very nice use of previous prologues. Definetially gives the feeling that all the previous stories were leading up to this one.
That all said... BRING IT OOOOOON!!!

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8809254
We can't afford your funeral :pinkiehappy:

I would've liked the prologue to be something fresh rather than being a rehash of snippets that have already been posted. I would've been more than happy to wait a while for something fresh as well. Using older material like this and calling it the prologue fells like... copping out? I'm glad to see the sequel, I just wish the prologue had been new material.

And I had honestly been expecting the name of this story to be "Divine Judgement".

Still, WHERE IS THAT FATHER/SON REUNION! IT'S A MILLENNIA OVERDUE! :raritywink::trollestia::pinkiecrazy:

Where have I read this before... hmmmmm? :raritywink:

A giant red and black centaur was doing battle with a purple alicorn, the two of them flinging beams of pure mana at each other, which proved to Atlas that neither of them were trained in the art of magical combat

Awoke a touch late, did we?:ajsmug:

“I’m sure it will take quite some time to properly make this castle into a place that feels like home,” Celestia said. “But I’m sure you’re all eager to explore all the nooks and crannies it has to offer.”

That'll be Episode 3 of the following season.:ajsmug:

After all, the GOlden Oaks library, in which Twilight resided, was destroyed in her battle with Tirek, so she had to move into the castle whether she wanted to or not.

I think you might want to fix Golden Oaks library

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