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(downvotes for me incoming) first comment, yay editor privileges! :rainbowlaugh:

I said it before, I'll say it again - that ending turned darker than I thought it would.

Still... holy hell, that was a great read! I don't usually read tentacle stuff, but this was really enjoyable.

I wonder how long this'll take to get into the top list - it certainly has the quality to belong there!
(and no, I'm not tooting my own horn in this case)

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How DOES it end?

Because I'm torn on reading it, but the ending will influence whether I read it or not.

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Not super dark, its left ambiguous.

For some strange reason I have the sudden urge to watch Monty Python and the holy Grail, lol that reference made be laugh

“Yes! Now hurry, mommy needs to have her fun!”

The "wat" meter just broke.

 inches,aking her throat

making

 had borrowed through

burrowed

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If that is ambiguous I really don't want to see a dark ending...

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well kind of ambigious. My opinion of what makes it truly dark is a little differnt though i must admit.

The number of drops should be three. No more. No less. Three will be the number you shall use, and the number of drops shall be three. Four should not be used, neither should two be used, except if you are proceeding to drop another in order to reach three. Five is right out.

Someone's seen Monty Python and the Holy Grail!

HAHA! I MANAGED TO STEAL JOHN'S COMPuTER AND I SHALL READ TO MY CONTENT!
*kicks down door* CALIBORN YOU DIRTY SON OF AN ENGLISH! GIVE ME MY COMPUTER BACK
Caliborn: OH SHIT!

ovary penetration

That's a new one. Props for crrativity!

Holy FUCK that was a good read. I wish it could have kept going.

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Atleast it's not Whitekitten dark.. I don't need or want to see that stuff anywhere near this site, by comparison, this site is so much purer, or atleast now it is anyways..

8485990 if rainbow dash as a broodmare and Twilight getting captured as well is ambiguous, I suppose you'd also call the sun 'relatively warm'.

Dude, that was mind-break, transformation, sluttification, and ended on a second person being dragged into it. There's nothing ambiguous about it. The ending is dark AF

Jest #16 · Oct 14th, 2017 · · 3 ·

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Like I said, my opinion of what a truly dark ending is different.

link to cover image?

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Its NSFW, no can do but I the artist is kinkypie and a quick google search gets you exactly what you want.

Well that was...truly disturbing in every size shape or form. and how did I come across this?

Personally I would add something like "It would be a few days before someone more well prepared came to rescue them, and they intended to make full use of that time." to take the dark edge off. Just my personal opinion.

Comment posted by Honey Lavender deleted Nov 1st, 2017

i am curious as to why people forget the urethra is a hole too this thing had just out every penetration there was except naval and urethral and she clearly said fill every hole she had which would also technically include ear holes and nose holes but ears are usually for brainwashing and the nose thing just isnt used

“Spike! Get your diaper and the rattle and get up here!”
“Do I have to? I did all my chores!” Came the annoyed response from Twilight’s adoptive son.
“Yes! Now hurry, mommy needs to have her fun!”
*in a laughing voice* Oh....God!!! :pinkiegasp:

“Uh, walla walla washington?” She didn't think that last one would work anyway
0:08

She had no time time to be curious

Day 2
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The sheer size of which

She felt the the thrusts

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That is wonderful to hear! As you noticed I dont do breast growth or things along those lines but the bit I have saw basically worked along the lines of "They went from normal to bigger then her body in two seconds." and you know me well enough to know that my favorite fetish is proper pacing. ;) So this was a fun project to push boundaries and do some stuff I dont normally do.

This was actually very good. I had put off reading due to the supposed dark ending, but glad I read it. The ending was rather typical for this type of story , from the other stories I have read, so it did not bother me. Though I would have liked to see more of Twilight but it was a commission so can’t complain. Hope to see more from you in the future.

She still wasn't sure if the plant could hear her, but she seriously hoped so. Her teats couldn't get any larger than they were now. Though if they did, I might finally be bigger than Fluttershy.

:yay:: "Silly Rainbow, you will never top me."

The feeling was a bizarre one but it was quickly ignored, the tentacle wanted it, thus she wanted it.

The tentacle approves this train of thought.

Her teats had grown obscenely, becoming easily larger than any other teats Twilight had ever seen, real or drawn. Which was saying something as the collection of magazines she hid under her bed was as extensive as it was depraved.

:moustache:: "Tell me about it..."

*Bonus points awarded for a Monty Python reference.

The bag flew through the air, easily being caught by the athletic pegasus. “Eesh, and here I thought I was weird. I didn't peg you as the type for a mommy fetish. Yowch!”

Twilidash anypony?

“Eesh, that thing is heavy.” She ignored the small package of seeds for now and focused on the safety manual, opening the page to the first chapter and skimming down the usual warnings. “Do not use if pregnant or intoxicated or yada yada. Do not use in the presence of great magical items, do not blah blah blah oh here we go! Use exactly three drops of water and an average sized pot filled with dirt. The number of drops should be three. No more. No less. Three will be the number you shall use, and the number of drops shall be three. Four should not be used, neither should two be used, except if you are proceeding to drop another in order to reach three. Five is right out.” Rainbow skimmed a couple sentences that were just as repetitive as the rest. “Jees, this is boring, I get it! Three drops that's it. Sheesh.”

What is this? A holy hand grenade?! :rainbowhuh:

And just like that the door to the pegasus’ room closed, and Twilight Sparkle succumbed to the creature’s lust.

Extra point if you get this reference.

"Let's enjoy ourselves, yes?"
ASTRAL FINISH!

She could finally relax and let the plant hold her, allowing her to focus entirely on the sensation of the bulbs working on her teats.

I would think Dash wouldn't be comfortable with the idea of being restrained.

Wanting to show her devotion, she wrapped her lips around the tentacle fucking her mouth, sucking on it while simultaneously rubbing its soft underside with her tongue, lavishing it with attention and urging it deeper. The creature needed little prompting and eagerly thrust into the mare’s throat, plunging past her tonsils and sinking into her throat a few inches,aking her throat bulge visibly through her skin as another of her holes were forced wider than they had ever been before.

Making*

Comment posted by Lunar_Flare6234 deleted Jun 27th, 2021

Incredibly hot.

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and you know me well enough to know that my favorite fetish is proper pacing

And I must salute your excellent taste in fetishes; the pacing of this story was great. I particularly liked Rainbow's changes in attitude to the whole thing, from eager excitement at the start, through "wait this is too much" and then (with a little help) "I could get used to this". Nice work.

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