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Just looking at the coverart, the first thing that pops into my head is the CMC marching around Twilight singing, "Oompa, loompa..."

This time, Zecora has unwholesome plans for Twilight.

No, by the looks of things, she has whole-and-then-some plans for Twilight.

Ch. 1. And Then There Was One: air inflation; water inflation; cloud inflation; stuffing; cheesy new lyrics for songs from the show.
Ch. 2. The Unbearable Largeness of Drinking: air inflation; water inflation; kiss inflation; inflation through ears; deflation; a brief bit of flattening; author's first attempt at writing bondage; more cheesy song lyrics.
Ch. 3.: ???

Ch. 4: Profit! :trollestia:

I love how the characters are showing a deal of self aware humor in chapter one. I hope there will be more chapters eventually.

7709924 Glad you like it so far! I do have the rest of the story already outlined, but it may take me a while, because I'm alternating between this and Whipped Cream & Other Delights.

yay new chapter.

Twilight sure got a wierd dream of being inflated..... love it

7882224 It's always the nerdy, introspective ones.

Holy crap. For something you were originally going to tack onto the end of chapter two, you sure went above and beyond. Maximum unf.

Always a treat to see something new from you. Some more creative ways of doing inflations.

7884913 "Above and beyond" is the best way to inflate a pony!

By the way, all of the items on Zecora's workbench (aside from the voodoo doll) are shout-outs to inflation scenes from other stories/cartoons that I liked. So the plate of cookies are a reference to "Pinkie's Ballooning Aspiration", and the pill bottles are nods to "Use Only as Directed" and "The Prodigiously Pregnant Pinkie Pie".

Wait... crud. You used potions in your stories, not pills. Lemme go edit that.

7885678 Thanks!

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Oh my god. I was wondering why the hell there was just a random plate of cookies! Dude, you're seriously making me want to write again...

This is just amazing! I really like how creative this got. Thank you so much!

7924469 And thank you for the kind words. I've got big plans for future chapters, though it will be a little while before I can return to this story.

I do hope we get to see some Zecora ballooning. She doesn't get it half as much as she should.

8005912 I do plan on including some. Especially at the end. Twi will eventually get her sweet revenge against that pesky zebra.

In the meantime, you might like one of my older fics, "Too Many Memories". It has some Zecora inflation.

Despite it being an inflation based story, my favorite part was actually the butt flattenings

8078302 Glad you enjoyed.

Have you read Pablote's stories? He's got more focus on flattening and other forms of cartoon slapstick. His stuff's on FA and DA rather than Fimfic.

8078684 yeah but he only has two flattening stories, and while they are really good, their isn't much of it on deviantart/FA/ or Fimfiction.

8157730 Well, several of Pablote's stories are about cartoon slapstick in general, so there's flattening mixed in with a bunch of other fetishy gags. Particularly, all of his FIM stories have at least one flattening scene: Sombra's Game, The Sun and Moon Are Harsh Mistresses, and Breathers for Applejack (specifically the Rarity chapter).

It's like Inception, if Inception were about pony fetish porn and absurdist humor. Ok actually it's nothing like Inception at all.

Keep it up.

8172386 That is the best description ever. Can I quote you on that?

Idk how to search for those number arts on derpibooru or furaffinity can someone tell me

Open up either site in another tab. Open up the page for a specific picture (rather than an index). You'll notice that the URL ends with a number. Copy-and-paste the number in the author's note into the end of the URL, and that should take you to the specific picture.

Here, poor Twilight gonna wake up to a soaked bed?

8172898 Oh dear. I replied to your earlier comment but forgot to actually tag you in it. But see here: 8173270

8173697 It's not my place to say. What happens in the bedroom, stays in the bedroom.

I've read everything you've written on this site (why my computer didn't alert me on these most recent two chapters is beyond me), and I will say that, in my opinion, this is the single-greatest chapter you've written. It's excellent in every way I can imagine. Well done! :rainbowdetermined2:

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Glad you like it! If you don’t mind: why do you think this chapter’s the best? With how close I am to my own works, I’m no good at judging them objectively.

Maybe it's my demented idea of her becoming as large as she could possibly get, but for my pride's sake I don't think that's all. The constant rhyming that went on in this chapter, all in Spike's dialogue, made some of the more awkward bits much clearer; it all fit nicely. It was all tantalizing, especially with his growth throughout. All efforts at stopping were futile, as everything she did only added to it; I like how you use props in your stories, and this one's using of everything around her, as well as the detail of her spinning around, was very nice. I think combining the two sources of smoke, and their kissing afterwards, made it all the more engaging. I think it was just the way you dealt with the dragon magic, and how volatile it seemed, that really drew me in.

I should mention that you've used every other prop very nicely in the rest of your stories; this one just appealed to me the most so far. I think I should say that this, to me, is subjectively the best, my favorite, as it were. I am also a huge sucker for this particular phrase, and others like it:

As the first puffs of smoke sped towards Twilight, she didn’t even resist this time. She just opened her mouth and let the smoke fill her even further.

That sort of thing really gets me going. :twistnerd:

Anywho, that's what I can offer. I should mention that you, in comparison to other writers I know, use props in your growth incredibly well, and I appreciate the effort you put into all of it. Keep it up (pleeeeeeeease)!

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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There is no Dark tag on this one. Twilight is a bit scared, but the effect for the reader is supposed to be more silly than scary. As for the Sex tag, this is focused on fetishy bits rather than on actual sex, but mod policy requires me to add that tag anyway. Every chapter is basically an extended version of Twilight and Zecora reenacting this scene...
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...with maybe some implications that Twilight is getting off on it.

(If you came here from One of Those Mornings—that one has fetishes I don’t normally write, so I don’t consider that one “canon” to Evil Expandtress.)

Absolutely love the story so far. And I can only imagine what Twilight's other five friends are dreaming about. :trollestia:

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Thanks!

About everypony else’s dreams, to be honest, I’m working from the idea that there’s no external or supernatural cause for Twilight’s dream here. She has a fetish that she’s been in denial about for a bit, and she’s got some other emotional baggage, and that’s what caused her subconscious to create these bizarre scenarios. So all of her friends are having perfectly normal dreams tonight. And if any of those are erotic dreams, they probably don’t include inflation, because Twi’s friends probably all have different tastes and kinks. But, you know, Death Of The Author. Nothing in here ever touches on the other five ponies’ dreams, so you can imagine they’re whatever you like.

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Well, I was half implying that they all have variations of the same kink. Would make for one hay of an awkward brunch. :derpytongue2:

Still thinking back on this story sometimes.
Most recently after a conversation ended up at "Mysterious Mare Do Swell". If you ever need another silly pun title... :derpytongue2:

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Progress has slowed to an absolute crawl, but I haven’t completely given up yet.

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