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FoxWithAMask
English geek, yep, that's me. I just want to spead joy with my stories and make people smileand I'm only just realising how cheesy this sounds. Meh.
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This concept seems interesting I can't wait to see where it goes.
It was at this point Celestia knew......
.....she fucked up
An actually original idea...well not really but more original then most.
does he become the zombie from zombi cover
nice, i get pissed when most people in displaced just know how to do shit, it's good to see that he is confused as to WHY he can do shit he has never done before
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Not exactly, but it was the inspiration for the character. He's got the clothing, but the type of zombie is different.
i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/413/624/8eb.jpg
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As you wish.
love it, hoping for a reason as to why Celestia killed him, and why there are zombies...and why he is thinking like he is nowadays <(wait that's a word you can spell?!) anyway great work, nice theme and a real shiner for the displaced series, i really thought there was nothing worth while in displaced stories. even with the thought that it couldn't all be bad i just couldn't find a good one, until today, bravo
Is this a ZombiU displaced?
Silly Celestia, You Gotta Shoot 'Em in the Head.
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Nope, I just took inspiration from it.
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Are you gonna have him be the zombie overlord?
Rushing way too fast
Slow down bud
Keep going
Yes this pleases me bring more!!
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also really good idea with the ammunition, much better then him suddenly being able to build the shit or just find it lying around. it keeps adding to the real mystery
Depending on how you proceed this story could get very good. I look forward to reading more in the future.
http://l7.alamy.com/zooms/b15c9eab7d8d478ca5a6f6ed1b20d259/queens-guards-grenadier-guard-and-welsh-guard-royal-guards-outside-e1cd1t.jpg
do you mean this gun? the one you named doesn't have a bayonet
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http://l450s.alamy.com/450s/h6rwn8/london-uk-1st-november-2016-1st-battalion-coldstream-guards-take-formation-h6rwn8.jpg
or did you mean like this? because that is a battalion, not the queen's guard
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SA80 L85A2 fitted with a bayonette: oh yeah mean this, didn't notice it at first
Looking forward for more :3
I'm normally pretty disdainful of displaced fics, but I also love retribution fics, soooo... let's see where this goes. Upvoted.
3 things i like to ask
1. When is the next chapter?
2. What type of zombie is he?
3. And how can he use a gun if he is a zombie?
well... if he continues in this path... I can only see 2 outcomes
1: he dies with a shoot to the head (unlikely but possible)
2: the zombies eventually will overrun the pony population and it'll only zombies left, in this case, he'll most likely be the only intelligent zombie, basically, he'll be alone...
I think he'll continue in this path quite a bit, but later he'll realize how foolish is this endeavor and will try to aid the ponies instead
Now it is getting interesting, but it doesn't make much sense for conjured zombies to be able to 'infect' living beings into becoming zombies themselves but I'll chalk it up for him being a displaced and he is an exception.
Bullshit. Your ass is gonna straight up kill her. If you ain't gonna attack, then you're a dumbass.
This story is so far an interesting one. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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How is he dumb for not wanting to go on a senseless rampage? When he said that he wasn't going to attack, he very clearly meant attacking Luna and Twilight.
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I was in a hurry and read the chapter quicker than usual. My bad.
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I figured, life happens sometimes.
Ya know, I feel bad for the guy. If I come back from the dead (not like a zombie) because of Celestia. I'm going to use my construction tools as my personal torture toys for her.
Part ZombieU, part Stubbs the Zombie?
"This is what Hope delivers, child. You should learn that now." -Kratos
"Hope is what makes us strong. It is why we are here. It is what we fight with when all else is lost." -Pandora
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I don't know...the idea has crossed my mind...
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Are you gonna upload it? Anytime soon?
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Working on the next chapter now. It should (hopefully) be done by the end of the week...maybe.
I like how you lampshaded his sudden expert aiming.
Now it got exciting
Love it!
Kewl
Yeah. It's rare.
make more of savage Spike
Things got quite interesting
I will be honest with you, it would've been a lot better if he still couldn't speak.
There had better be a good reason why Celestia killed him, because right now, that's one of the story's huge weak points. Like, mind control or something, anything other than because having your protagonist hating and swearing at Celestia is 'cool'.
It's not.
Que the badass zombie fight music!
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Is...is it coming across as that? As the swearing is me just trying to make him 'cool'? I...didn't intend that. As a rule I tend to have characters grow up in the same general area as I did. I don't know what it's like where you live, but here swearing is pretty much second nature, even casual conversation involves swearing. I never meant for it to seem edgy. That's the last thing I want!
And in case this seemed like I'm making fun of you or mocking you, I'm not. I know that text is hard to convey emotions but I don't mean any disrespect here. Like I said, I write what I know, and what I know is when someone gets angry they swear up a storm. I hope this helps clear up why he talks the way he does.