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FoxWithAMask


English geek, yep, that's me. I just want to spead joy with my stories and make people smileand I'm only just realising how cheesy this sounds. Meh.

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This is awesome this is awesome this is awesome pls make more pls make more pls make more

Yeah, this has the potential to be super interesting. Do write more.

Looks good. Can't wait to see more in the future. Keep up the good work!

huh...

Interesting...

Yeah. We'll be back for this later.

Greed huh.

Interesting premise, i am intrigued :pinkiehappy:

can you give me one little spoiler?, is this human against everyone else or more human x ponies or in some sort of team?

I love this concept and if he gets enough power Demon King Greed

Super powered self insert OC destroys MLP?

Wow! That was quicker then I was expecting. Not that I'm complaining. Can't wait for the next chapter!

... The Seven Deadly Sins?

I like it the characters play of each other in interesting ways and it brings an evil smile to my face

Interesting...I look to find more. Also, Greed/the MC is awesome. Most demons that are MC (Or Main Characters for a long way of saying it.) are OP sonovbitches using power and big meaty strength to get their way, but Greed is actually smart and uses his own manipulation and skills to trick his enemies and maybe, if he is good enough at it, destroy an entire empire with rumors and false truths. But that’s just what I think of it though, don’t pay attention to you don’t like it.

This is a nifty story. I hope to see new words soon.

This is pretty great - Can't wait to see more! :pinkiehappy:

Do you have writers block?

Didn't this story used to have a sex tag? You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears.

“Don't underestimate mortals.” Malice said sternly, “Even those that don't have that level of power. You're both too young to remember, but several hundred years ago a lone human fought his way into Hell. He slaughtered us, killing the Lords of the time and making it all the way to the King of Evil.” I blinked, the fuck was the King of Evil? “He killed him and diced his soul into dust, he's the reason we don't have a King of Hell. And after he was done he carved his way out. He was mortal and all he had was his skill with a sword and a basic grasp of magic. That is why we don't underestimate mortals.”

For a moment, I thought about Doomguy, but he doesn’t have a sword, I think...

The ultimate use of irony there! HA! A demon wielding a holy sword! Beautiful!
I need more!

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No, it never had a sex tag. Although sex might, big if there though, appear in this story as it’s not very prevalent or a main focus I haven’t put a tag in for it. Also I cannot write sex scenes to save my life.

how many of greeds friends are we missing? :3 :pinkiehappy:

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Just one. But that doesn’t mean the group is almost full, after all who’s to say others won’t end up joint him?

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'Pinkie' MORE FRIENDS!!???:pinkiehappy: (small voices whisper) More parties :pinkiegasp:

maybe an angel? :pinkiecrazy:

(perverted part of mind) maybe one or more of them are gonna bang a angel/s
(Reason part of mind) :facehoof:

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shhhh Reason just let the darkness engulf you and the silence will bring you peace.

It actually would intensely hurt them and at least render them to soul state temporarily but otherwise depending on circumstance will probably have the same or different effect than the one mentioned

Finally! I'm glad i didn't remove this story from my tracking list. Personally i think the shorter chapter is fine along with the dark jokes, but I'm weird. I hope to see more from you and this story soon.

more please. also wraith is suppose to have a spartan class fighting style. that means efficiacy if there is quantity.

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Wraith is a unique Demon, which I’ll get into more in the next chapter (or maybe the one after), but basically, he’s strong, not as strong as a Wrath Demon, but he’s much more skilled.

For example if he was unleashed on our world he’d completely wipe us out. All on his own. But, like I said, I’ll be expanding on him further into the story

So how was our world destroyed exactly?

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