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MrWriterWriter

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Slash17
Slash17 #1 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · The game is afoot! ·
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Now that is how you start a birthday! Spike is in for one wild ride.

DarkDMan
DarkDMan #2 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · 4 · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Interesting and sexy.:moustache:
But, does it make me a bad person to not care for the, "Spike X Rarity", shipping anymore? There are just really, really better choices out now.:applejackunsure:

I know, I know, he's going to have sexual encounter with the other girls, but these two... Sorry.:facehoof: I'll stop. Sorry again, looking forward to the rest of the story.:twilightsheepish:

WinterSoldier
WinterSoldier #3 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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A sex scavenger hunt. Best birthday present anyone could ever get.

DanvilleBengal
DanvilleBengal #4 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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8270342

Hey, that's your opinion, man. Don't worry about what others think of it. Though, if you're that concerned about it, you can just keep it to yourself. With me, sure other ships have come to harbor like Sparlight, StarTrix, TenderBloom, and countless more, but Sparity is still gonna be one of my favorites, regardless of whatever canon, trends, or opinions say.

Spikemaster105
Spikemaster105 #5 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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So Spike got a new iphone with a video of 9 hotties in sweaters only singing happy birthday day.....Spike.....i envy you...why can't my phone have that

sejox
sejox #6 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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another fic from you? sweet. Unluckily for me, I don't have the time to read for now. This will remain in the read later bookshelf for a while

Wildcard25
Wildcard25 #7 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · The game is afoot! ·
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So far it looks like it's going to be awesome

DanvilleBengal
DanvilleBengal #8 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · The game is afoot! ·
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"There's a file on the notepad, Sugarcube." Applejack spoke up, looking more than a little comfortable in his hoodie, "Just pop that open an' follow the clues."

"T-they'll lead you to the parts of the actual gift." Moondance added, in a rather shy tone, her cheeks a Fluttershy-worthy pink.

"When you find the first one, you'll see what we have in store, Spikey." Rarity winked.

"Have fuuun!" They all said in unison. Even though it was a video, he couldn't help blushing when a couple of them blew him a kiss before it ended.

Got to ask--which one of the nine were the ones that blew him kisses? My guess is three of them: Rarity, Starlight, and surprisingly Fluttershy.

MrWriterWriter
MrWriterWriter #9 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · The game is afoot! ·
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Heh, I'm leaving that up to your imagination.

Frankie2
Frankie2 #10 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · The game is afoot! ·
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His real present? Gee, I wonder what that could be?:raritywink::raritywink:

DanvilleBengal
DanvilleBengal #11 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Mr WriterWriter, you've got a repetition that needs to be looked at. It seems that the following passage has been duplicated:

"A-all..mine...?" Deep down, he knew that was an absurd question. But, in a case like this, it's impossible to not want at least some personal confirmation.

"Every..." her voice came out in a husky purr, "...inch." Spike shivered when her tongue slide along his neck, albeit briefly.

"Rarity...wait, the massage gel..." During it all, he'd felt some of it run onto where she'd lick. Even though it was no secret that everything at the spa was non-toxic, it still had to taste nasty as hell!

"...is edible." She playfully smacked her lips, "Mmm, pineapple and sexy dragon, my favorite."

Spike was now in a quandary; the mare he'd been crushing on ever since he first came to Ponyville was now sitting on him, nude, and had flat out just offered herself to him.

And he was drawing a complete blank as what to do next! Most of his fantasies had been focused around just getting her to notice him. Now though... As such, he did the only think he could really think of: he just stared, with both hands at his sides.

Rarity, apparently, was aware of his dilemma and had plans of her own. With one surprisingly smooth move, she pushed herself up towards him, just enough to put her chest an inch from his face. While at the same time, he felt her grasp his hands in her magic and moved them to a supple set of hips, "Care for a taste, Spikey?"

I noticed it while I'm currently reading it. It's probably a mistake on your part, but I think you need to look at it and delete the duplicated passage.

TurboSwag
TurboSwag #12 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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"A-all..mine...?" Deep down, he knew that was an absurd question. But, in a case like this, it's impossible to not want at least some personal confirmation.

"Every..." her voice came out in a husky purr, "...inch." Spike shivered when her tongue slide along his neck, albeit briefly.

"Rarity...wait, the massage gel..." During it all, he'd felt some of it run onto where she'd lick. Even though it was no secret that everything at the spa was non-toxic, it still had to taste nasty as hell!

"...is edible." She playfully smacked her lips, "Mmm, pineapple and sexy dragon, my favorite."

Spike was now in a quandary; the mare he'd been crushing on ever since he first came to Ponyville was now sitting on him, nude, and had flat out just offered herself to him.

And he was drawing a complete blank as what to do next! Most of his fantasies had been focused around just getting her to notice him. Now though... As such, he did the only think he could really think of: he just stared, with both hands at his sides.

Rarity, apparently, was aware of his dilemma and had plans of her own. With one surprisingly smooth move, she pushed herself up towards him, just enough to put her chest an inch from his face. While at the same time, he felt her grasp his hands in her magic and moved them to a supple set of hips, "Care for a taste, Spikey?"

This section is written twice.

Frankie2
Frankie2 #14 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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"However, that will have to wait for now. After all, you still have your other presents to find." She gave him one more kiss, slipping the phone into his hand as she did. "Better hurry. The rest are waiting"

Yeah Spike. You have eight more presents to go.:raritywink:

Gamerdestiny6
Gamerdestiny6 #15 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Found an error

Rarity, apparently, was aware of his dilemma and had plans of her own. With one surprisingly smooth move, she pushed herself up towards him, just enough to put her chest an inch from his face. While at the same time, he felt her grasp his hands in her magic and moved them to a supple set of hips, "Care for a taste, Spikey?"

Spike was now in a quandary; the mare he'd been crushing on ever since he first came to Ponyville was now sitting on him, nude, and had flat out just offered herself to him.

And he was drawing a complete blank as what to do next! Most of his fantasies had been focused around just getting her to notice him. Now though... As such, he did the only think he could really think of: he just stared, with both hands at his sides.

Rarity, apparently, was aware of his dilemma and had plans of her own. With one surprisingly smooth move, she pushed herself up towards him, just enough to put her chest an inch from his face. While at the same time, he felt her grasp his hands in her magic and moved them to a supple set of hips, "Care for a taste, Spikey?"

You repeated the first paragraph twice.

DarkDMan
DarkDMan #16 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Word. Was going to delete it after I re-read it. Hmmm, may still do it.

Wildcard25
Wildcard25 #17 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Nuru Massage. The best massage to ever be made

DanvilleBengal
DanvilleBengal #18 · Jul 2nd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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8270642

I just noticed it--looks like our writer corrected one repeated passage, but inadvertably created another...

MrWriterWriter
MrWriterWriter #19 · Jul 3rd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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8270762
Ok, I think all the double paragraphs now

Thepervertedeye
Thepervertedeye #20 · Jul 3rd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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i love these type of stories, cant wait for the next ch

abronie
abronie #21 · Jul 3rd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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My body is ready.

I think Spike's is too.

Sunset_Shimmer83
Sunset_Shimmer83 #23 · Jul 3rd, 2017 · · · The game is afoot! ·
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I've seen a few stories like this, but this is definitely one of the better written ones. looking forward to see who Spike comes across first

Alexander-Crossover
Alexander-Crossover #24 · Jul 3rd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Fuck yes! Keep this going please I love this story!

FieldOfMemories
FieldOfMemories #25 · Jul 3rd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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I'm loving this story. Excited to read more.

Ekhidna
Ekhidna #26 · Jul 3rd, 2017 · · · The game is afoot! ·
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Let the hunt begin.

darkstone57
darkstone57 #29 · Jul 3rd, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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I look forward to the next pieces of brilliance you present.

OmniFox
OmniFox #30 · Jul 4th, 2017 · · · The game is afoot! ·
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Can you say 'Greatest Birthday Scavenger Hunt' ever?!?!!

OmniFox
OmniFox #31 · Jul 4th, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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And this is only the first clue to kickoff of hot and heavy rutting.

123ABC
123ABC #32 · Jul 4th, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Spike.EXE has encountered an error. Please reboot self destruct.

shirotora
shirotora #34 · Jul 5th, 2017 · · 25 · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Please put warnings of kinks like double-dick in the description. Not everyone likes that and you'll only tick people off for making them waste part of their life.

Rescue Sunstreak
Rescue Sunstreak #35 · Jul 5th, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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LOL look at all the snowflakes complaining about "trigger" and such. Get over it kids, the story has a Mature and Sex tag on it. That pretty much tells you it is going to have adult content in it. Don't like that, don't read it!

I look forward to more story :rainbowlaugh:

MrWriterWriter
MrWriterWriter #39 · Jul 6th, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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8276765

8276881
Ignore him. This is the same guy who called me a liar because I 'omitted' the same thing in Sea of Amore

Navydivea
Navydivea #40 · Jul 9th, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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8275885
You do know its a common thing for reptiles right?

Mr101
Mr101 #41 · Jul 9th, 2017 · · · First Clue: Working out the knots ·
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Looking forward to more, is it bad I kinda wanna see Ember being submissive with Spike? :moustache:

Yonder Strange Things
Yonder Strange Things #42 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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Do you hear that sound? That tiny little whimpering of chords?

You shouldn't.

That's not even the world's tiniest violin. I didn't even care enough to get that out for you.

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meerkat8472
meerkat8472 #43 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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I feel sorry or whoever goes last. Spike is going to be so exhausted by then that won't won't get much pleasure out of him, or even be able to give him much pleasure as he'll probably just fall asleep.

Frankie2
Frankie2 #44 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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'Why do I suddenly feel like I'm gonna need an energy drink...or five?'

You better get some protein bars and some Gatorade while you're at it.:rainbowlaugh:


8305857 I have a feeling Twilight thought of that ahead of time.

Wildcard25
Wildcard25 #45 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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And now he's deflowered the Dragon Lord. I can't wait to see who is next.

nightwolf65
nightwolf65 #46 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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'Why do I suddenly feel like I'm gonna need an energy drink...or five?'

because you are going to need them and more depending on how horny they are.

Mrof
Mrof #47 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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IM betting the next one will be pinkie pie at sugur cube corner. she'll be offering a food kink and spike will get some energy back. I aslo bet that apple jack is going to have it out in one of the apple fields.

NetherTempest
NetherTempest #48 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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I'm not a fan of the whole double-shaft thing but this story is doing great so far.

Alexander-Crossover
Alexander-Crossover #49 · Jul 18th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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Still awesome, Ember's appearance was unexpected but definitely welcome, keep it up.

Hewolf
Hewolf #50 · Jul 19th, 2017 · · · Second Clue: Tipping the Scales. ·
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*Chuckling* They EXPLODED as the bed IMPLODED!!!!! :rainbowlaugh:

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