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Dante24


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I'll follow it. Sounds interesting.

Please Tell me those dragons will be Punished!

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I'll take that as a maybe I read fics liekt his and the guilty party never gets it. Why..I no idea.

So many questions, so many opportunities, so much potential... I can't wait to see where this goes and whether or not my predictions and preferences are real

Firstly, I hope that they find that group of dragons that did this. We know they have names of at least one of them, Goliath (the red one--thank God that you decided with a OC instead of Garble when you said a red dragon). Hell, even have Ember and Torch find out about what happened to Spike. Go easy on Amethyst, I think that she did have some feeling for Spike even if ultimately it was all a farce. Goliath needs to take care of his mates better, then he wouldn't have that kind of scenario that she dates another dragon just to make him jealous and want her back.

Secondly, I have to say it because I'm a fanatic of Sparity, so bitch at me if you want for this. Just remember, I know already first hand that Rarity's with someone else, and Spike was with someone else before the beat down, so I already knew Sparity wasn't happening. Here goes: Rarity didn't see nothing romantic happening between her and Spike enough that she hooked up with some random unicorn stallion, but cares about Spike in a family sort of matter that she's willing to KILL her friend's ex---Damn...:applejackconfused: Part of me would be thinking 'You're such a f------g hyprocrite Rarity' but another part of me says "WAY TO GO!! Do you need an accomplice:pinkiecrazy:"

Related to that, I have a feeling that even though Celestia and Luna are trying their hardest to prevent what could be seen as a possible act of war because I'm pretty sure at least three of them are comtemplating violent gory murder and overkill to send a message--which could easily be answered by a bunch of dragons going after Canterlot in retaliation, some sort of retribution has to be done.

Finally, Spike you are a damn dragon. It may take a bit of time, but you better recover stronger than ever. Whatever creature that earns the right to be Spike's special somecreature has to be someone that you have to hang on to---probably ain't too few of mates with that kind of fotitude these days.

....just leave out the possible "Prince" stigma so you don't get a golddigger...:trollestia:

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So many questions

Questions? What questions? Do tell

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for example:
How did he meet the dragoness?
What's his connection with the princesses?
Is he going to see her again? and if so, is he going to forgive her and her drakefriend, or is he going to take revenge on/justly punish them?
and a lot more, but I assume you're going to go into those kinds of details as the story goes on.

If I was in Spike's place I'd want every single one of the dragons skinned alive. Then maybe rip out their entrails and strangle them with them.

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Firstly, I hope that they find that group of dragons that did this.

Blood will be shed!

We know they have names of at least one of them, Goliath (the red one--thank God that you decided with a OC instead of Garble when you said a red dragon)

To tell you the truth, Garble wasn't even a thought in my mind until you brought him him just now. lol

Go easy on Amethyst

No

I think that she did have some feeling for Spike even if ultimately it was all a farce

No she didn't. She's evil. Blood will be shed.

I have to say it because I'm a fanatic of Sparity, so bitch at me if you want for this. Just remember, I know already first hand that Rarity's with someone else, and Spike was with someone else before the beat down, so I already knew Sparity wasn't happening

I'm not gonna attack you for liking a pairing I don't.......I'm not THAT kind of brony.

Rarity didn't see nothing romantic happening between her and Spike enough that she hooked up with some random unicorn stallion, but cares about Spike in a family sort of matter that she's willing to KILL her friend's ex---Damn..... Part of me would be thinking 'You're such a f------g hypocrite Rarity'

Well here's the thing.....Rarity loves Spike just not in that way, she knew how Spike felt about her so she probably explained to him that that there was no way they could be together because of the eight year age gap.(Spike 13, Rarity 21 at that time) She let him down gently.

but another part of me says "WAY TO GO!! Do you need an accomplice

I think she has more than enough

Related to that, I have a feeling that even though Celestia and Luna are trying their hardest to prevent what could be seen as a possible act of war because I'm pretty sure at least three of them are contemplating violent gory murder and overkill

You have no idea my friend....no idea.

which could easily be answered by a bunch of dragons going after Canterlot in retaliation

Hope they have a good health plan

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I'll leave you with this then....Blood will be shed.

Beat the coltfriend sip mate, it'd make a jolly good show.

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You didn't finish responding to my comment, plus there seems to a sizable space where probably a image or a YouTube window would go... what was the rest that you wanted to say about it??

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That was it.....I don't know why it did that

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Oh. :derpytongue2:

Anyway, I really hope that they catch the bastards that did this to Spike. And well, I'm starting to turn on Amethyst as well--she's as guilty as Goliath and the rest of his crew. So whatever happens to her is exclusively because of her. She turned out to be a genuine 100% Bitch.

I just noticed that it seems Blueblood is a good guy in this. Got to say that he being a good guy, or at the very least a neutral party, is refreshing. Wonder what the skinny between Blue and Spike is, they're pretty informal enough that they pal around with each other.

EDIT: I wouldn't be surprised if Blueblood is the one out of all the group that is the one that gets Spike his new special someone. Really cool with what he's probably gonna be doing for his cousin.

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Wonder what the skinny between Blue and Spike is, they're pretty informal enough that they pal around with each other.

Blueblood sees Spike as a little brother.....the same with Cadence.

7456796 Eh. For stuff like this I prefer extreme vengeance. Look up top torture methods and top torture devices on Youtube, that's the kind of stuff I'd want to happen to the dragons.

So far I approve of this.

You know what's funny?

I know a story where Spike nearly killed someone for talking to his girlfriend. And the readers where eating it up. Saying how great a boyfriend Spike was and how kind it was that he only nearly killed the other guy. This approach here is much more realistic.

I like the chapter and looks grat sorry to see the clt friends are so jealous and stupid, they going to screw up and lose everything.

I like it, all the way you used Blueblood and Spike. I want to see Twilight's coltfriend suffer what all he did for Spike, and Blueblood will show him how sick he is for all the family. XD
Great job man.

Please tell me there's more coming soon. I'm really liking this story.

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Currently proofreading adding and deleting scenes in chapter three....should be ready within the next hour or so......hopefully.

I get the,feeling Twilight's "sexual desires" are not her own. Something more is going on there... :trixieshiftright:

At this point I'm guessing at least one of the Mane 6's coltfriends did it. This seems to be another story where all the Mane 6 have coltfriends, the coltfriends severely hate Spike, stuff happens and they eventually leave their coldfriends to get with Spike.

Watch a few movies and play a few card games? That has to be the shit shittiest slumber party I've heard of. I'd have more fun jamming a fork into a plugged in toaster, shoving a paperclip into an electrical outlet or playing Russian Roulette with myself, they're acting like Spike is 5 years old. I'd rather have the adult slumber party.

7460031 yeah adult slumber party's!
We want to make smore's and tell scary storys and talk about are feelings and shit because we're adults!

P.s keep it up story teller

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No, those desires are her own.

7460546 Scary stories? There's nothing scarier then watching Alien and/or Aliens when you're 5 years old lol.

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It does seem to be that way, but that's too obvious to me--I can get some jealousy from the coltfriends because of the doting that all the females are on Spike, but they have to look at this from the mares' perspective--Spike is like a collective litter brother to all of them. He grew up with them, and in a way he was raised a bit by them (make no mistake though, I'm pretty sure Celestia and Luna did the most raising) Even when each of the Mane 6 found their own special somepony, whether they be stallion or mare None of the colts can say that they intimately know Spike the way Twilight knows him or Rarity knows him, or any of the others for that matter. Hell, even Blueblood and Shining Armor know more than the coltfriends because to Blueblood and Shining, those are honorable brothers to Spike.. That only comes from interaction. There's gonna be some time while Spike is recovering and they are gonna do their part up to the point that Spike is well again.

If they have hate for Spike because their girlfriends at the moment are doting on Spike, they need to take a look at themselves. Why in the hell are you so jealous anyway??? You have one of the most beautiful and popular mares in all of Equestria on your side; if anything, other stallions are probably envious of your standing, not the other way around.

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I assure you, that's not the case

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Couldn't have said it better myself

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Well to be fair, Spike is underage

7462483 Spike is 16 years old, not 4 years old. This story is gonna tank with the most boredom inducing 'slumber party' you can imagine. That kind of party makes me want to play chicken on a NASCAR track.

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It's like Celestia said previously when Spike was having some of that hard cider, and she wasn't having it--even if he was getting legal officially in a few hours, he's still underage until then. Therefore, he wasn't gonna get any.

And yes, I can see where you're coming from with the whole slumber party thing. Two things though: 1/ Spike's still underage, and 2/ It's a slumber party, where we know all the good kinky shit happens when all the adults are alone and all the boys are out of the way. Plus, considering that their respective supply of penis is somewhere else, not to mention Twilight and Pinkie are there (take a wild guess where I'm going with that), we know that it would probably degenerate into Mane 6 orgy. When that happens, it's a relief that Spike's not there to see it.

I know that it sucks as well--I know how filthy and in-the-gutter that my mind can be when it gets to 'intimate' matters... All I can say is that I kinda hope Spike gets a girl that when she gets into the sheets, she could give Pinkie a run for her money. You know, as a wink to the rest of them--it's like saying "This is for all the times you made me stay behind to fuck each other because you all say I'm too little. Well, the tables has turned".

7462895 It's a relief Spike isn't/won't be around for the lesbian orgy? That's like saying it's a relief you missed out on the best thing that would ever happen to you. The slumber party isn't just the Mane 6 either but the other 3 Princesses as well.

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Let's put it in like this...do you even want to be at an event where you're solely a spectator? And you know what is eventually gonna happen? Also knowing that even with all that's going on, you cannot participate. (Forget about the fact that technically he's in a wheelchair for a bit--he's trying to walk again, but for the most part he's bound to a wheelchair). I wouldn't...

Plus it's a slumber party designed by PINKIE PIE, and she's more than aware that they are all adults and girls...I say that it's a relief for Spike to not be there because, and this is just me, it would just be straight up torture. It would be like the dog that is tied to the post on his leash, and there is a juicy steak that is just outside the dog's reach...


....I admit, it's a poor excuse as a metaphor, but it's what I see in it.

7462975 It's still far better then a party that makes you want to hang yourself from boredom.

great story! ijust wished there is some romane for spike poor guy needs a good girl.

:twilightoops:What The HELL Did Pinkie do when she was DRUNK?

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Some questions are better left unanswered

Sorry to bother, but in the next update? I really like the story!

I simply want to see more. i have really gotten into this story.. Good job:eeyup:

sing the song of sorrow my scaled brother and joyne the club of heartbreak I know you're pane fate is the coldmaster that finds you and puts sorrow in your hart:pinkiesad2:

And of course it's over before vengeance is given, goddamn lazy ass excuse for authors.

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What are you talking about?

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