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Everybrony Listen

They were all in love with 'Shy and they were drinkin' from a fountain that is pouring like an avalanche comin' down the mountain.

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Dude you have me intrigued. I can't wait for more.

:raritystarry:(gasp) he's a chronic master baiter

Aww. This was a sweet chapter. Still wondering what his past was like for him to end up as a hermit/mechanic. Can't wait for the next chapter.

DAWW, I'm rooting for the main character

What the beck was that freak out with sunny? Man that was unexpected.

could he be Equestrian, and could he have done some dirt there? :trixieshiftright:

Will the cowgirl position be used?

bet it has to do with her powers from the movie.

I have the feeling that his so called 'secret' is going to be revealed soon, since Sunset's reaction was less than pleasant. He, I called him Gas Monkey btw, dropped some subtle hints about things of his past, but I could be completely wrong. Only time will tell!

Glad to see some interest in this. I hope it goes over well as more things are revealed.

(Edit) I still don’t get why this comment got downvoted so much...like, do people get triggered by authors showing their appreciation or what?

Thanks to those who voted it up though, I appreciate it.

Dude you stopped here c'mon!

OK, lol. Give me a few minutes, I'll post the next one.

Well that explains a lot. But man dude sounds like a terminator or something. Can't wait for more soon.

Now I have this image where he looks like Arnold.
"I need your cloths and your boots... Jaaa..."

I'm getting like a Hancock vibe.

"Oh hey, it must be Duke Nukem Forever! Imma read this."
"I should not have read this."

Liked the part about him playing the game with his sweetheart. Maybe by the end of the week she'll throw him a bone. Or rub his. Giggity.XD

Holy shit! That was hot. Always the cute and quite one's am I right?

Comment posted by Yarael-BJ-Poof deleted Mar 8th, 2017

This story actually started out purely as a clop fic. I wanted some actual story so there would be some build up and better intimacy between the characters, but once the sci-fi elements started taking shape, it sort of took over a bit in the early parts. There will be more sex in this story, but I'm trying to maintain a good balance.
With this story, the devil is in the details. I know chapter 9 is a rough one to get through, trust me it was a rough one to write, but it's important to understand the ins and outs of this guy's existence for things to make sense later.
Thanks for following so far everyone.

Ya know I never thought about that whole lava thing. That's pretty daunting when you think about it. Great chapter.

O.o huh. That was both frightening and arousing. Here's hoping for the threesome. But counsenseualy.

Don't worry, no one gets taken advantage of or forced into anything.

I wondered how things would have been different if I was around to join the battle with them.

you just started something my friend.:ajsmug:

And then the rest of the girls knew thanks to Rarity.

Comment posted by Everybrony Listen deleted Jan 27th, 2017

Are u referring to rarity's gossiping?

Ah. OK. I wasn't sure. I can be a little dense sometimes.
So what did y'all think of that? I have a hard time with the sex parts. I can think of it easily, but putting it down into words is tough.

Dude I thought it played out both perfectly and hot. The question is will this be a one time thing? Or will Fluttershy be willing to share? Or will more friends want a piece? Also can't wait to read more.

It's still a bit early in the plot to say much at this time. I don't want to give anything away.
Thanks for the compliments!

Oh. This is heavy. Perhaps it was the power that she has that absorbed whatever our main man has. If that is the case perhaps the others can do the same. Still can't wait for the next chapter.

I was already liking the story for the dimension you're giving the characters, making it an interesting story beyond just the erotic aspects. Now you're taking things in this unexpected direction, which I think is great. I also can't wait for more.

Comment posted by Yarael-BJ-Poof deleted May 5th, 2017

Hymn..... pros n cons ..... i guess it would be considered a std then considering it stays around for like ever and no one really wants it hahaha. Trying to be vague with that statement since I don't know how to work the spoiler bar and don't wanna ruin the surprise for new readers.

Somebody pick up that phone. Cause I friggin called it. Also on shit. Also also good one Dash.

Smooth Rarity. Real smooth.

Oh boy. This is gonna be a lllllooooonnnng night.

Finally. The talk. You really know how to build the suspense you know that. Can't wait for that.

Well I hope you guys are enjoying it so far. I do like to write some slice of life scenes, like the ones in the last couple of chapters...just to mix it up a bit from just going between sex and sci-fi all the time. Also, I was trying to put the reader in the character's shoes, having to put on a smile and have to sit through the whole evening, waiting for 'the talk' as you call it, letting their nerves build up. Also, this is obviously an ongoing story, I hope to keep it going as long as I can so you guys can have something to read and hopefully enjoy for quite a while, so I don't want to rush through it too fast and end it too soon. I'll try my best to keep the pace from slowing too much, but sometimes it's necessary in order to have the right impact...like when Fluttershy realized her new power for example. I needed the right number of nights to go by so that she had time to realize she couldn't sleep.
I sometimes have a hard time remembering where you guys are in the story cuz I've stayed ahead with the writing the whole time. I actually just finished chapter 26. You guys can expect a bit of action and sci-fi, there's a few erotic scenes too, which I've tried my best to keep those interesting as we move forward. I'm a bit nervous about the next little bit that I have to write, there's finally an early introduction to a villain-type character and the scene I have in mind is going to be a pain in the ass to write. Hopefully you guys like what's in store!

Hehe. Still got it yeah?:rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Yarael-BJ-Poof deleted May 5th, 2017

Sorry, I should have warned ya...lol
Did u actually make it through the whole chapter? I just figured you'd skip it...

Trust me sunny. You wouldn't want to know what these immortals do at night.:ajsmug:

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