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They were all in love with 'Shy and they were drinkin' from a fountain that is pouring like an avalanche comin' down the mountain.

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Loving your mlp eg forever story keep up the good work 👍🏻

You're welcome :pinkiehappy: It's a very good story and I'm actually interested to see where this goes:twilightsmile:

Yo! This is Grasshopper Keller, going with my real name for the site (mainly because I forgot how log on my old account, to which I downgraded my PC from W10 to W8.). I hope you can get back to writing the next chapters on your story ASAHP, because I love this one! And I also hope that RD gets better, 'cause that last part really scared me a little bit.

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That’s a bummer to hear. I hope things work out for you!

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Ah, well, just got laid off, so spare time isn’t really at a premium here. Glad you’re doing well, though.

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I am well, thanks for asking. The story is coming along—slowly. Time and energy have become a rare commodity as of late, but there are only five chapters left to write after the one I’m on now, so the end is on the horizon.

How are things going on your end?

You doin’ alright, bro?

It pleases me that you favored Sweetie Belle Gains a Soul. :twilightsmile:

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nothing really
just boredom and work
and some praser moments in reading
or nothing at all

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Had the flu since Sunday night. Not bad now, probably will go to work tomorrow.

You?

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you are welcome
what bothers you ?

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A bit under the weather.
Thanks for the follow, BTW.

you are welcome
how are you ?

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You're a friend. I followed you because I knew you were good. And, you know, this is just an invite. I'm spreading this largely across my followers.

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Thanks very much!
Not only is it my first story on here, but the first word of the story is literally the first word of fiction I had ever written. Granted, I went back and revised the first eighteen chapters once I got a little better, but...yeah.
I’m glad you enjoyed it.

And thanks for the follow!

Holy shit, this is your first story? Awesome! Amazing work!

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Nice. My best friend was in the Navy for not quite ten years. He’s in Alberta now, too. (Grande Prairie)

I was nervous writing most of the scenes that involved guns, spies or even the police because I have no real experience any of that stuff, other than what I’ve seen in movies—which in many cases is bullshit—and I was worried I might get called out for doing something wrong by someone with more combat/law/government experience.
I’m glad you (among others) are enjoying it though. At the end of the day, I’m here to tell the story just for something to do, but given the time investment, I try not to cut corners and I keep it as realistic as I can so it’s at least worth the effort; it’d be a waste of time to write a half-million word story that makes no sense, lol.

And yes, finished chapter 81 two days ago

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