Thanks for the fav. Hope you enjoy the story.

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Thanks! your not the first to ask that and I definitely consider it. If I do it will be after the next few stories I have in progress. I'll let you know when I get it started.

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Oops, wrong button...
No, just kidding
>>No prob. Sure you can ask that.
Thats actually hard to say, to be honest. Great piece of work in general, I guess...

I especially liked the entire atmosphere, of your story. Good job in expressing the negative emotions. Still really can't put my finger on it.

It would have been nice, if you had included a "heart to heart conversion of Twi and the main 5" , aswell as the final thougts, of shimmy horse. Maybe in some type of sequel, if you are interested. Just saying.

But Its good like that, nevertheless

Stay healthy and keep kickin'

Thanks for the fav! can i ask what you liked about it?

Thanks for the fav! ... likes and comments appreciated