Ok...

Not bad. I'll keep reading.

Honestly, the first thing that came to mind when inserting a name to be called. was when in Fallout 4, you could name yourself F*ckface and people would actually call you that.

This is actually a pretty great start I like it

Huh. This start is a great deal better than some fics i've read.

This is a pretty good start, better than quite a lot of fics I've seen. Hell, it's even better than one of my old trash starters.

You have good taste in music my friend

Somehow -- and I don't know why -- I got the sense that following these girls to their little dinner was going to lead me into some kind of bizarre adventure.

jojo ref

Not boged down with too much detail let's you paint your ouwn picture but gives you the numbers to work with

Flashbacks to way back when the MC didin't have name.

I'm interested so far, I just hope this isn't one of those stories where the characters fall for the OC for no reason other than he's the OC. The story has good writing so far and does a good job of properly interpretation the characters, and its clear you have plans for this story and will be putting a lot of effort into it. I am currently reading through a very long story I am also reading through, but I am excited to read this whenever I am done with that. :)

Yep. Been over a year since the last time I actively read this story thanks to life, but the first chapter is just as good as I remember. Can't wait to actually read the whole thing this time, lol.

Huh... Rereading this, and yeah
Long-fics typically don't have the best beginnings in my experience

But this is fantastic

Ok, I'm hooked. Let's see where this goes. :D

You had me hooked on this story when I read that the guy was a mechanic with a Dodge diesel. Being a mechanic myself, I'm partial to the 1st gen. More room in the engine bay.

I finally spoke up. “Look, I have a tool kit in my truck. It’s expensive. I’ll leave it here with you along with my wallet and phone. Then I’ll have to come back. How’s that?”

is MC a fucking moron or something?
edit: nevermind i just realised he was taking rarity with him, fair enough i guess