First person; a lonely man meets seven young women he'll never forget.
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I'll admit I'm a little disappointing but the explanation makes sense.
Surprised Fluttershy and Gold have such shortsighted views on the whole hero thing. I mean there's more to being a hero than just beating up bad guys.
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It was either this or midichlorians, LOL. (J/K)
As for Golds and Fluttershy, she’s only been home for a day and a half, so she’s still fresh off the experience and is speaking mostly out of emotion. Golds has a lot more on his mind than that, but we’re not going there just yet.
I confess, this chapter—aside from being a massive exposition dump (this whole sleepover thing is rife with backstory, setup and foreshadowing)—was really an exercise in writing Sci-Twi’s character; I’m not a book-smart or studious type of guy, so I avoided writing her for a long time...as if that wasn’t obvious already.
I’d be interested in some feedback on how I did with her, if y’all wouldn’t mind.
This was informative. Can't wait for more.
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Seemed fine, I didn't notice any obvious problems with how she was written.
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Cool. To be honest, she really wasn’t that bad, just time consuming because I had to google tons of shit for her lines. Just have to remember to add some dorkish charm so she doesn’t come across like Data from Star Trek.
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The next one is...more funner.
Thank you for closing off a few problems, sad to see them go though. Pinkie and AJ definitely have less reason to join the club now, though Dash might be more considered?
Poor Spike. My old dog behaved teh same way in the last year or two before we had to put him down. I just hope things dont go further the same way.
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I second you writing SciTwi pretty damn good. Specially if she's an opposite for you.