First person; a lonely man meets seven young women he'll never forget.
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Lets see how well the improvements in data tracking over th last decade work in picking up persons of notification crossing the border, especially with one of them having been a person of intrest in the past.
Might even be worth finding a place to stop every so often and stuffing Sunset at least the first time to see if it helps, that and they have to stop for gas and material supplies and trash disposal. Otherwise the average speed tracking functions are going to really be showing up warnings.
Sorry about the Fluttershy thing, I really shouldve asked, that given pony Fluttershy can do insects, and human shy has only had her powers for a fraction the time, in a less magical enviroment, that she had less of an ability, but still impressive even so?
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No worries about flutters. It doesn't specifically say that she can't talk to bugs in the story and it was coming up a lot in the comments so I figured id address it.
That passport would most likely be an alias on not his real self.
As for sunset, expect lots of sexual tension for the next little bit. I set it up on purpose to keep things interesting...
Oh my god [Blank], of all of the grand laws of existence to break, you fucked with a person's "Me time".
Now aside with the development of this chapter, I'm amazed Cody or the shadow organization isn't taking interest in Sunset. I mean, if they were surprised that some random quiet girl in the woods turned out to be an immortal, whose to say that others in her circle of friends aren't either? Imagine their surprise if they sent a follow up team to investigate or extract her, only to find her missing and a notice that she crossed the border.
With a man
Now let's help Sunny save on batteries
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Damn, you guys aren't making this story arc any easier to write, lol.
8090235 We do this for our love of this story
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One thing I just thought of...I've been surprised that no one commented or asked about the cover art which has been up for about a month now, and Sunset just dyed her hair finally a couple chapters ago.
8090374 I wanted to but the moment passed, so I left it as an unsaid understanding
And now the true depth of our favorite character's... well, character is revealed. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Yup, that's exactly the reason I didn't mention it in my last chapter review.