First person; a lonely man meets seven young women he'll never forget.
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I'm not sure exactly...for what I have planned, it will likely go over 100 chapters. Although I think I'm going to have to slow down on posting new chapters after this arc because now that it's springtime here I don't have the same spare time I had when I started this back in the dead of winter.
I seriously hope something happens to bring them together.
Some immortal stories always mentioned that particular downside to immortality. Like the manga UQ Holder, the MC was told that a method to counter his variety of immortality was to sever his head and just lock it in a sturdy container like a safe, then dropping it into the ocean for added measure.
So yeah...the other night I decided to read the writer's guide provided on this website, and wow! As it turns out, I have been BALLZ DEEP into the ass of quite a few decently-sized writing faux-pas. LOL
Oh well, it is what it is. I am a mechanic after all, not a writer and I thought I had some good ideas that I wanted to share, and thus far have tried put them into words the best way I can.
That being said, I plan to use what I learned from the writing guide to try to make it the best story I can in the upcoming chapters, and maybe when the story's done, I'll go back and touch-up the...*sigh*...first 60 chapters.
New chapter tomorrow, by the way, but after that, I can't promise to keep 'em coming every three days anymore. Like I mentioned earlier, I've been much busier lately, and in the time I have leftover for writing I'm usually pretty tired, and the ambition just isn't there. There's a fair bit of action scenes up ahead, which are time consuming to write because I choreograph all fight scenes in my head first, then write them down once I like what I have. The issue is writing action can come off stiff because it's nothing but physicality, and it can come off like reading an instruction manual. It's something I need to work on because I've got most of the action already planned out, and some of them are fucking doozies, so I want them to be as awesome as possible.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=qTNdq2c7pUs&index=2&list=WL&t=0s
The story is starting to get pretty good. Nice job on the writing. Though I will admit that splotch on his past caught me off guard with just how dark it was.