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I like sex as much as the next guy, but I hope this is the last. Can't wait to get into the next arc.
Good chapter, in your description you said you would use MLP villians i was think you could use the dazzlings because you said that they had some past with _______ a few chapters ago and i think they would make good villians for a few chapters
MLP villains in EQG world, best Ive seen is the Roly Playing gamers story, where Sombra is head of their equivalent of Microsoft, and to me, is at least like Shere Khan in Tailspin. Chrysalis is VP, Tirek I havent a clue, and Discord is head coder. After all, if you code the game, you get to define what reality is at any moment to your every whim.
Somehow I dont think i would get to the three sirens chained spread on the garage wall while the three girls and OC do their best to subdue them through continous stimulation, but its an intresting option.
Somehow, I suspect that the most difficuly entities to turn up in this reality, would be Dragon Rage Spike, no matter how much of a ride Rarity would get out of him, and Maneiac.
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Yeah, it's all done now. Lol, I already felt like I was pushing it with this chapter, and I actually considered leaving it out, but there were too many things I liked in it, plus I wanted to make sure that ______ got-off with all three girls. To me, it just felt incomplete without that happening. (I'm a bit OCD like that)
When I came up with the idea of the messy 4 way, I was like: 'yeah this is gonna be so awesome!' but by the time I finished writing part 4, I seriously wanted to slit my throat. Clop, although stimulating to write, is very descriptive and time consuming (for me anyway, I don't know about other authors) and after 4 big chapters of writing nothing but sex, I just wanted to rip my laptop in half and throw it against the wall. But in the end, I liked how they came out.
I will say, I REALLY enjoyed writing part 1. I didn't want it to be just 3 girls going at it individually, but instead, have Rare and Flutters (the couple), basically double-teaming Sunset, who was like the guest. I don't know, I just thought that was a cool dynamic, and I loved how it played out.
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I won't mention who the villains will be, but I will say it won't be Sombra or Chrysalis. There will be some mention of them, but I don't plan on actively pursuing them within the remainder of this story, since 'Us' is basically in shambles for one, and two, it would potentially be a worldwide pursuit, and after it took this long just to rescue Fluttershy, I honestly have no ambition to write that.
Instead, we're gonna move onto some new antagonists, but expect a similar tone, (dark and gritty at times), although the plot will be scaled down, with no travelling or long searches or any of that kind of thing, and there will be more of the vigilante stuff, which I enjoyed writing, and was obviously setting up using Rarity during the rescue mission.
Also, like I said, expect some light-hearted shit for the next bit, some sex (no more big fuck-fests though, mostly one-on-one type stuff) and cameos...I actually have plans for a chapter dedicated solely to cramming in as many fucking cameos as I can, which I've had brewing for quite a while, and I think it's gonna be a lot of fun. I can't wait to get to it.
Anyway, I have to spend some time blocking out the second half, and make a few storyboards so I don't have a repeat of last time, where I had already published chapters committing myself to the rescue mission, yet had no fucking clue how I was gonna get Sunset inside the CIA. I shit you not, guys, I was flying by the seat of my pants during that whole arc, and I can't believe it came together the way it did.
Also, looking back, I CANNOT understand how I managed to keep pace publishing new chapters every other day the first three months of this story. It takes me a solid week to finish a chapter now. Some of it is because I'm busier these days, but I think some of it is also that I've evolved as a writer, and I'm just spending a lot more time with editing and just putting more thought into what I'm writing down.
One other thing, I just found out at work today that a delivery company whose trucks we work on just bought 474 new vans, and they want 4 all-weather tires put on ALL of them. That's 1896 tires...and they all have to be done by September 30th. Shoot me in the fucking face!
*sigh*
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Don't get me wrong, it was a nice way to end it all. Just, any more of it and I might go crazy. So, I'm glad it's done.
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Let's not kid ourselves, if I put another clop chapter up, you would totally read it.
(sorry it took me like a week to think of that, lol)
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True, but with a lot of skimming.
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Aw jeez, you cut me deep, man. You cut me real deep.
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When are you going to update this story because it has taken longer than usual and me and your other fans need to know what happens i'm not trying to stress you but could you just let me know
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I am working on new stuff as much as I can, but I'll be up front; there won't be anything new for a while. It's a busy time right now. My daughter is starting senior kindergarten next week and my wife is going back to school. Next weekend, we are going to Ottawa and then I'll be busy with work after that. The fall is a crazy time for me as everyone in the world wants their snow tires installed at once, and it's usually a solid two months long, crazy days of nothing but tires, tires and more tires.
Having said that, I am spending as much free time as I can working on the new stuff. I'd like to have at least 20 chapters finished before I start publishing again, that way I'm not losing my mind trying to keep up with a schedule like I was during the last bit of the first half. I've got a rough storyboard of sorts made up, along with a list of the characters and what happens with each of them during the second half. My intention is to involve everyone a little more, rather that just focusing on Fluttershy, Rarity and Sunset, but it makes it more difficult to remember everything that's going on, so I needed to draw up this reference chart to help me keep it all together.
I think I have some good ideas for what's ahead. If you guys liked the first act, then I'm sure the second will keep you entertained as well. I'm doing what I can to get things going again as soon as I can, but it's important to me to have a significant chunk of it done first.
Don't worry, new material is coming, even if it takes a bit longer than we want. Just think of it as being between seasons.
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Ok glad to know it's coming soon
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Good to know I love this story. :3
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Ok, I see. Sorry if I came off as a bit too hasty in my comment. I'm a history major and sometimes jump the gun on people when it looks like someone didn't do their research on a topic. But, no harm, no foul, right?
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Nah it's all good.
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oh.
oh.
alright then.
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Holy shit, are you done reading this already? Lol
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Just a heads up to avoid confusion if you're still partway through the story: I just spent most of today going through the whole story, changing the OC's name from ______ to 'Golden Arrow', or 'Golds' for short.
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Are you still editing the past chapters for the OC’s name?
Cuz it’s been so long since the last update..
sorry If im getting inpatient it’s just that I’m excited on the ongoing story
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Yeah, I actually finished the name change in a day. Surprisingly, it didn’t take long.
I am currently working away at new material, almost everyday in fact, but I want to have a good sized chunk written before I continue publishing again so I don’t wind up strung-out like I was when I left off in August.
It looks like it’ll be a while yet, unfortunately, but it IS coming along.
Thanks for your patience, everyone.
I love your avatar, by the way.
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Thx but it’s not mine I don’t know the name of the artist
I just got it in deviantart 😊
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I would like to ask a question if you don’t mind, it’s about the other three..
Would pinkie, rainbow and apple jack also going to be immortal or their going to stick to their decision on being mortal. Would there be a twist? that there would be a situation on they’re are forced to be immortal too?
Sorry if this is a unfair question... or are you going to say as some author would say “you’ll find out soon enough just wait for the story to unfold”?
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Unfortunately, that’s not really a question that I should answer right now. But I WILL say that the second half does focus on those three characters quite a bit more.
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Yup a writer at heart
Thanks I’ll await for next chapter.
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i mean the story wasn't that long compared to other i bingeread.
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Still, you got through it in a day or two, that’s pretty impressive.
I’m working on new material as we speak. Here’s hoping the second half will get me to ascension level 3. Lol
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i mean at this rate, i might need to make a new list just for amazing stuff like this.
Jesus, this is in the top three best stories, I've ever read on this site. I mean, you could publish this! It's a very interesting story that made me almost refuse to put it down! Who knew Fluttershy could be like that? I don't know if it's finished or not, but damn! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for reading, and thanks for the positive feedback! It’s always a good motivator reading comments like this.
But...top 3? I don’t know, man. Lol. There are some brilliant writers on here who I couldn’t DREAM of holding a candle to.
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No He's right this is one of my favorite stories on this website
Also sorry to bother but do you maybe have a date when a new chapter will be added
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I’ll let you guys know by the end of this month
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Thanks
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No I'm Matt Hardy from WWE
Are you possibly going to do a beach chapter or chapters again
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It doesn’t look like it. I’ve thought about it, but I’ve already had to cut quite a few scenes to keep the story length manageable; almost everything that’s not essential to the plot had to be taken out, which is unfortunate because it eliminates some scenes I like and some cameos I was looking forward to doing.
The section I’m writing right now is early winter, and it’s just started to snow a bit.
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Ok
Merry Christmas and happy new year!
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Thanks!
Happy New Year to you, too!
Looking forward to a fun and productive 2018.
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The 28th of this month.
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Yes sir, new arc. It could almost have been done as a sequel, but I felt like I had to continue it here because people who read the second half first would have no clue what’s going on.