First person; a lonely man meets seven young women he'll never forget.
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P.O.V. Shift.
Golds and Flutters putting a jigsaw puzzle together.
The way Rarity gets through changing buildings, eventually Gold is going to have to make a cargo container apartment to leave in various places around town, wasteland, farmers fields, derelict parking areas, docks etc?
Is Rarity going to start looking into Night Stick and Baton supplies for her time with Sunset?
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To answer, no. Stopped at the start of here. It was 5AM, I had an afternoon shift and the call of food and sleep beckoned. That, and I have a strict rule on binging stories with consistent clop, there comes a point when too much sex creates the illusion of being a slog, making one think "Which is the filler, the sex or the plot?"
Though I did like the light dominance play here, been a while for Sunny to have a bit of that.
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That’s one thing I wonder, is if I put too much sex in the story, but then again, it was initially meant to be a clop fic—I just watched too many action movies as a kid so that inevitably worked its way in.
Since the writing process takes so long, it can feel like ages between sex scenes for me, and sometimes I get a ‘hankering’ to do one... like this one here. In all honesty, I felt like this chapter needed some more run time, and I’d been thinking about experimenting with the whole ‘sex club’ thing by pairing Sunnybuns with the fashionista, so that’s what I did. Although I never found SunsetXRarity to be a believable romantic ship, (personality mismatch) I do love the idea of them being purely physical; a booty call for each other, if you will.