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wait.....bugbutt and i have a thing for stairs and crystals sombra is behind this?! im like....wait what! not going to lie i didnt expect that plot twist at all
Yaay, OC an Shy are going to take a lesurely ride down the river. Wait.. Isnt that America, Canada, and theyre in Mexico?.. or am I confused and its US desert,a nd theyre heading back home to Canada?
Pity they cant take the train tunnel in is it Chicargo or Detroit? And they cant take it at night, thats when they turn the falls off for power, and turn them back on again for the tourists during the day.
Big guy.. Guile?
Yaay, the kitties survived, so far. hope they remember water and kibble and lots of newspaper etc for them.
Sombra and Chrissie, eh? Nice.
Hah, so the series villain's counterparts were also stirring up shit on this side too.
And they're all major business owners, just like the Enclave, I wonder what Tirek would be? He was all crazy about getting as much magic as possible in Equestria, perhaps a power company, like Fallout's Poseidon energy and subsidiaries pertaining to developing alternative energies, and its other more, famous technologies.
Oh wait... that means the Starlight here is also probably a techno wiz like Twilight, and probably a bitch here too (Pre-redemption)
Now I'm just anxiously waiting for what the future holds.
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I thought about throwing Tirek in there too, but I didn't want to overdo it. I figured two villains was enough for this section, and I didn't want to use up all of the show's villains on one story arc.
I only have plans for one more action/adventure story arc closer to the end, which won't be as long as this one. I don't want to say much about it, but just for a little teaser it involves ______ and the girls getting into a tussle with a local crime syndicate. Other than that, I have plans for a mix of slice of life, sex and character progression/introduction.
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They're in the USA. New Mexico, to be exact. Headed for Canada.
Just an FYI folks, I spent some time last week patching up chapter 14; the hot tub scene. Going back, I wasn't super happy with some of the sentence flow and lack of dialogue, so I fixed that up a little, and added another position with Rarity as well as a bit more detail. Nothing too crazy, I just wanted it to be a little better.
You GO, Sunset! Show 'em who's boss!
Love how the chapter was written, basically giving a giant massive 'fuck you' to the biggest, baddest syndicate on the face of the planet in one fell swoop.
Plot twist: those guys are just a border patrol doing their jobs, falling victims to a psychopath and his two girlfriends.
...Dunno how I missed the blatant Deadpool reference with Golds whistling a jaunty tune as people are dying the first time I read this chapter, but the more you know, heh.