First person; a lonely man meets seven young women he'll never forget.
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Twilight finally realises she can now have fun times.
Will Sonata go before the others? Or will Adagio try dealing with Goldy first, and find the secret?
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Ah right fair enough
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I can perfectly respect that. I definitely understand the struggle of writing a character of which one more aspects you know little or nothing about. I just figured that this is the premier governmental enforcement agency we're talking about, and they'd be the kind to have a plan for literally everything, y'know?
Either way, this is pretty good for having been thirty percent into your first (and only) story. I was absolute shit for two whole YEARS before I got as good as the writing in this chapter is, and I'm still not much better.
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This part was fun to write, but I remember it being pretty tough, too, partly because of my lack of knowledge of the CIA’s general processes and also because of how many loose ends that get created in these spy-type situations.
I will say, my favourite part to write was just after Cody left, and Sunset had to write notes to Fluttershy to tell her what was really happening while maintaining a phony verbal conversation to throw him off as he listened. That was such a fun thing to come up with, starting with her purposely fucking up his coffee so she could do the “oops, silly me” routine and use the opportunity to touch his hand and read him.
Also, I appreciate the compliments and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. This is one of those ‘the rabbit hole goes pretty deep’ kind of stories, so if you liked the Cody part, you’ll probably love what happens later on.
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I will admit, credit where it's due, that scene was very clever, both for you to write and for me to read. It was thrilling to read that bit, all the while thinking of how many ways something could have made the whole situation go to shit, and then the jarring swerve coming along of Sunset using her powers to read Cody's mind and figure out exactly what she needed to do to get him out of their hair.
I do, in fact, enjoy stories just like that, so I can't wait to read more! Just can't right now, I'm polishing Chapter 9 of my own story before I ship it off to the masses.
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I feel like Princess Twilight would get pregnant and thus create an alicorn baby, but that would be probable if nick were still immortal if he passed through th portal and if Princess Twilight is mortal in the eqg world then screwing golds would only make her immortal in both worlds if it doesn’t reset her body every time she passes through the portal.
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Didn't think about it that way, and you're probably right.
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Hey, that just means you're damn good at writing plot, lol. That's a level of respect I honestly can't give a lot of people nowadays because they always screw something major up and then the whole thing just goes right down the garbage disposal.
Then they took a shower and had a cute nap together. The end.
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That’s the face you authors get when you deliver a huge disgusting cliffhanger.
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More like this, actually:
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