First person; a lonely man meets seven young women he'll never forget.
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... Is Golden going to get an immortal harem? He's well on his way. 5/7 with at least two others besides Fluttershy and Rarity being interested
That was great.
Are there any plans to get Equestria involved at some point or are we just ignoring that side of things? I'm honestly curious if Alicorns are the same as the immortals, lesser immortals or something else entirely.
So, between AJ and RD, who would be the Jack, and who would be the Ass in the JackAss video theyre making?
Someone might think that trying out the Whickerman next to a barn of hay isnt excatly a good idea?
"Applejack exhaled through pursed lips. “Earlier today…Golds and I boinked at his shop.”
“Pppppfffft!” Rarity leaned forward suddenly, spraying a mouthful of tea across the room."
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There's already one pink pony that breaks the meta on an hourly basis
God have mercy on this world, when a human variant no longer requires sleep...
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I think the author answered a similar question waaaaay back in the earlier chaps, I think he said it was either gonna be at a minimum of reference or no interaction at all
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Well, if anything mentioned managed to help, then I'm glad for it. And yes, while my OCD on grammar does distract me, I have enjoyed the ride very much thus far. Just sorry if anything I've said came too late as I only recently managed to start this story.
Last thoughts on the subject. I vaguely recall that single 'quotes' have been accepted for thoughts, I just think italics alone was preferred as it seemed to avoid clutter or confusion between one quote phrase and another.
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Random thought, but why the brown/red color texture for Sunset in cover. Don't get me wrong, I actually like it as it sets it apart, but just curious.
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If you have grammar OCD, then you are a saint for wading through those early chapters! I’d never written anything before this, so there was definitely a bit of a learning curve there. I personally hate looking at these older chapters because of how rough they are compared to my current stuff. Some of it is pretty embarrassing; especially the sex scenes. (the ones I haven’t fixed, that is)
As for the brunette Sunset: it gets explained as the story progresses.
I just finished binge reading all chapters of this. Its decent, but becomes a slog after a while
This back on hiatus?
Great taste in movie for thoughs who don't have the time because it is long rat race is a shorter if watered down version of it (in my opinion)