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The Inner Lewd


Just someone who is pretending to 'word' as hard as they can. Isn't that what we all do?

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“By the Queen, that’s hot!” -Blink, changeling Infiltrator.

You said it, sister!

Will there be a sequel? I'd love to read a sequel.

This is weird. In a good way. Allie's all kinds of adorable.

Why don't you promote it by adding it to our group here?

This story is 100% Squirrel-Girl approved!!

I believe this is going on my watch list. I'd love to see this continued.

Ha! That was unbelievably cute!
And described wonderfully!

Great story~ Plenty lewd, though I didn't expect a changelings womb to be directly connected to their ovipositor like that. Since the womb is meant to hold another changelings eggs and all. But, if thats also where her body would make her own eggs before they move into the ovipositor system, that makes sense.

7519630 To be fair, it was written like that for the sake of the fetish. Having the eggs travel through the womb and into the ovipositor would be impossible, as the eggs would just get lodged in the womb and hatch there. I really don't like making things unrealistic, but I had to for this to work. So no, this is not how the changeling reproductive system works in my other fics, only this one.

In the canon for my main stories, the womb isn't even connected to the ovaries or ovipositor at all, and is pretty much just a one-way sack that leads out of the vagina. In addition, a changeling's 'womb' is not even homologous to an equine womb, but it is analogous. The reason for this is a because there is a small muscular sack that the fallopian tubes connects to, which is where the eggs are stored prior to oviposition. This is technically a changeling's true womb.

I'll make sure to explain more in a future story, so stay tuned!

7519655 Okay, I thought that the eggs normally move through the womb into the ovipositor, but for the eggs placed by another changeling in the womb, the changeling laying the eggs would secrete something akin to a natural glue that would seal the connection between the womb and the ovipositor for the duration of the incubation. Still, "Is porn, why overthink?" seems to be a good policy for this. And, just about anything else lewd.

7519717 Actually, I gave this a great deal of thought. I have most of the biological processes and reasons behind them thought out. Overthinking something is what I do. And yes, the fluid that a changeling produces after laying an egg becomes rigid when it comes into contact with the natural fluids within said womb, sealing the entrance to the womb until the larva are ready to be birthed. Both infiltrators (females) and the average drone (males) have a womb but if an infiltrator is implanted with another ling's eggs, then the love that fed their own egg production would go directly to the other changeling's eggs. They would also start to transition back to a drone in this case -- their body wouldn't be getting enough love to gestate larva (once the eggs hatch) AND produce eggs, as the larva would always suck up the excess love -- reforming their male reproductive organs.

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Hah, that's delightfully strange. Imagine ejaculating and then having it turn around and wave at you. :rainbowlaugh:

Nitpick: Allie uses her name once before she's given it. :twilightsmile:

7520267 And fixed. Thanks for catching that!

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7518906 I spy familiar faces. :rainbowlaugh:

Lovely little story.

This story is more confusing than my sexualality (funny joke man)

:rainbowwild:databit file likes this, so do i

I've lost all hope in humanity.

Now I must regain my hope somehow.

7521479 *quickly puts on a mustache and glasses!* :trixieshiftright:

-Sanity is overrated

“Um, remember when you were sleeping by that pound a couple days ago?”
pond

A small trickle of affection radiated from the creature at the prospect of getting fee.
fed.

but it felt too good to stop as her peak rapidly approached, huger all but forgotten.
hunger

killing anything on the surface and getting rid of all grime.
all the grime.

I am so glad I gave this a chance :pinkiehappy:
Thank you for writing and sharing!

How about that why boner becomes a sequel yay boner? :rainbowlaugh:

please continue this

7523155 Thanks for spotting those errors! I'll be sure to correct them post-haste.

Great story; well written and detailed. The only nitpick I have is this character switch here.

...Blink smiled around her face-full of alp-luachra tail; she kind of liked these muzzle hugs. They were comforting.

Yes yes yes yes yes. The chant looped in her mind as her pleasure peaked and...

You should replace the first pronoun in the paragraph with the proper noun of whose thoughts are being described (Allie in this case). To ensure the reader isn't confused by the perspective switch from Blink in the previous paragraph.

She shook her head. “Nah. It’s weird, but not scary. It’s not like you drain ponies dry or anything—that would be silly!”

Fun fact: Ponies drained dry of love do not, in fact, become lifeless husks. They become something far worse. Something devoid of any natural affections and incapable of ever feeling them again. Creatures without compassion or pity, who exist solely to excise their pound of flesh from every pony they snare in their nets.

The ponies are transformed... into hedge fund managers! :fluttershbad:

This was very intresting, in a good way of course. I have never been a vore fan, but you pulled it off quite well. Good job. :heart:

7524286 Ah, that is a bit uncertain, isn't it? I'm still getting the hang of writing this style of third-person (kind of winging it, really), so some things may slip through. At least this was an easy fix!

7523709 I can't read that second image. Even opening it in a new page and max zoom it's *just* too small to read more than the first two lines

I hope to see more of these 2 :pinkiesad2:

7526087 here, you can find the image in the second of the four posts made about it by the creator in Derpibooru right here.

*Music plays*
Fimfiction!:
Making you physically attracted into liteally any fucking thing since 2011.

Just one thing I can say : is there other stories like that ? Because I want MOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Blinky. Stuck now. It will not unstick.

gawd that was surprisingly hawt

You've done alp-luachras good, here!

7522046 This is what you lost hope over? :rainbowhuh: I can think of several things so much worse to lose hope over, and all of them real things too.

7531167 Maybe you couldn't tell I was joking?:ajbemused:

FFS, people tell me to get a sense of humor. Then get pissed at me when I get one.:ajsleepy:

7531191 :rainbowlaugh: sorry, I was playing off the joke by joking back.

7531215 Eh, its fine. I'm just used to people taking me too seriously these days.:ajbemused:

7531356 As I've said. Its fine.

7520267 if that ever happene to me, it would be my last

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