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A clopfic author.

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Woo!

Thought you knew someone? You thought WRONG! Very applicable to this chapter.

Tough Nut is a lucky bastard. Who wouldn't want a Changeling for a wife? Could go to bed with a different pony every night.

I didn’t even bother turning my head, and smiled at the closet door. “Surprise me, honey.”

And thus, she turns into Surprise
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Haven't read this yet, I plan to do so later, but I must say one thing;
Your username is superior to everything ever.

You with the ass avatar again.
I love you.

Giving you two likes and two favorites in one morning for the awesome stories.

Often it was to embellish pictures, but sometimes people would go to these shops to pull pranks on people.

shouldn't it be ponies? Anyways, it's a great story. Hoping to see more chapters soon.

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Yep, it should be "ponies". Fixed.

Because as we all know, Dungeons and Dragons is totally all about sex...:trollestia:

Gods... This can't end well I half expected a pony to overhear them and wonder why 'Nutty' was cheating on his wife.....

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Oh that would make for a great chapter. Nut out with a different pony everyday, none of them his wife. :rainbowwild:

Ha very good story, now to see what pony he shall bed next...I do hope its Pinkie Pie.

Jeez, you'd think that he'd be furious at her for making him experience something so horrifying.

But then again, that would lead to no sex. :rainbowwild:

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He's a tough nut. Not so easy to break, and besides... it is his wife. Exposing herself is a big deal considering the Elements of Harmony are probably across the street from him! He could just walk over there and say "constable, I demand this creature of morphic dynamism be detained immediately!"

But he won't, because he's a reasonable pony.

im so jelly every time i read a clopfic, and i'm superjelly every time i read clopfic with a changeling.

Why is there only the one chapter :raritydespair:
So well written, where is the rest of the story :raritycry:

It's an ok start so far, but I'm a bit confused with the need to change the fact changeling feed on love. Or alternatively, if Holly has lied to him: the need to lie in the first place?

Believing that Holly is telling the truth and noting that the attack on Canterlot has happened, it brings up the confusing question of why the Changeling queen told everyone she came to invade to take their love and feed her people. Did the queen find herself ordering some sort sort of tasty cake from Canterlot with the slogan on it "Make with fresh ingredients. And love." and thought that was part of the cake and gathered her changeling army to take over Canterlot and export the tasty 'love' to be used in all future Changeling cooking?

Sorry, it just leaves me with questions when something that's know in cannon is changed, but never gets explained why. It's like bursting into a dragons lair, and finding it empty and asking where the Dragons Horde is, which the Dragon replies "Dragons collect treasure? Where did you hear such an idea! Dragons don't horde gold!' and then later commenting about that nasty Dragon Smaug and what he did to that poor Dwarf city.

Edit:Also, why is there no Changeling tag to this story?

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Sorry for the late response.

I realize that this story isn't as great as it should have been. This one was written up pretty much on a whim, with little to no thought past the general premise and character names. I'll have to throw this one back onto the drawing board too. With just one chapter, it doesn't give a lot of answers, and probably raises a lot of questions as it is.

So I guess at this point all my stories (save for the lackluster already completed ones) are going to undergo some revision. As to when it's going to be done, I can't say when. There's a lot of things happening in life right now, and as much as I hate to disappoint people and leave them in the dust, real life takes priority.

Regardless, I appreciate your input. I've just added the Changeling tag, too.

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This one isn't really 'bad', it just has that one flaw that I pointed out. As I said, it seemed odd that you change how changelings work. No "We feed on love to increase our magical power so we can transform the wasteland we live in to grow the plants we need to survive. We live on food just like the rest of you." simple answer or anything like that.

Awwww. That's a fairly adorable start. Really quite enjoyable. It takes an interesting tack on a couple of things (How Changelings live, how long Diamond Dogs have been known) and i can't wait for more.

are you planing on continuing this story?

4530167 Once I finish At Their Service, yes.

I found your theme-song.

More...More...MORE!!!MOOOORREEEE!!!!!

Looks like we will never know what her next surprise would have been.

I'm gonna go ahead and guess the story is actually complete and the author decided to change the status tag.

Damn fine start... To bad it never continued ... :ajsleepy:

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