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Dragontamer99


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The dragons were thought to have died out. All the dragon riders were dead. It is said that dragons aren't real. Only two people remain that knew about the dragons. They keep it A closely guarded secret until one day on a very, very special day. Secrets are revealed and one young child shall start her destiny.

Hey if you guy have any questions or ideas either pm me or go to my Discord I'll do three link just in case it gets fulled. Okay, let me said this the link won´t work on here for whatever reason plz tell me why it does not work for discord work dang WORK :raritycry:.

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Chapters (29)
Comments ( 9 )

Fast pacing a problem i see here...

Very good idea though, but this feels like a first draft of the fic. Rough, but interesting.

I'll keep an eye on this, but i might not immediately read it completely. But i will have my eye on this

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Thx if there's any more advice that you have for me please let me know if there's anything I need to fix let me know too

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Of course. I'll be in contact then

Why is the synopsis split into two different fonts?

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Oh um don't konw just felt like it

*starts singing*
DOVAHKIIN, DOVAHKIIN, NAAL OK ZIN LOS VAHRIIN
WAH DEIN VOKUL MAHFAERAAK AHST VAAL...

Finished the first thingy ma bop and i must say
10/10 Action
10/10 Romance
10/10 Mystery
0/10 Croxenian Count (Needs more Croxenianz)
69/10 For the first chapter overall.
Now i shall read more!

That whole story was confusing as fuck, tried to keep up but my brain couldn't handle such complex literature. It seems grammatically and plot wise pretty good, characters are okay just pacing and focus are confusing especially to reads that don't know what is going on like me reading this, however it was still.enjoyable, even if it was REALLY hard to follow through. 69/10

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