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The Inner Lewd


Just someone who is pretending to 'word' as hard as they can. Isn't that what we all do?

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Haha I knew it was you just from reading the short description. Gonna have to read this later after I get some work done for sure.

cuddling (absolutely disgusting).

I think you meant wonderful instead of disgusting.:twilightblush:

While this isn't my type of thing I had a good time proofreading. His quality of writing as increased tenfold I might add, not that he wasn't great before! I hope everyone that reads this enjoys it thoroughly and comes away satisfied :twilightblush: See next time!

anatomically correct equine genitalia

ok... why would you write this in the tags?

7629250

I think you meant wonderful instead of disgusting. :twilightblush:

I know what I said. :raritywink:

7629300 As always, glad to have your eyes.

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Some people like that kind of thing. I mean, there is a group dedicated to it after all. Some people can't get their rocks off to clop if it isn't anatomically correct. Personally I prefer human anatomy, but I'm not gonna knock what another likes

This was a good story, hope you will keep making more.

7629546 There is an actual group solely for this purpose? I have lost faith in humanity... :fluttershysad:

7629684 That's a bit of an exaggeration. Surely there exist MUCH worse things out there. I mean, why click this story if you didn't like its content anyway? Personally I'm bivalent on the issue, but I'm curious as to why that is much worse than anything else in this story.

7629702 I don't say I don't like it. It just confuses me... like Pinkie

7629703 Alrighty then. I meant nothing by it honestly.

Vitae #12 · Oct 9th, 2016 · · 16 ·

7629703

You had faith in humanity before you found out that people like anatomically correct horse sex?

What place are you from cause I want to go there now, also.

Glory to the true changeling race?
Death to the race traitor Thorax!
We are black and we are proud!!!!
BLACK BUGS MATTER!!!!!!!

You'll understand soon enough.

Ahh, excellent to finally see this posted! I am delighted to have been able to help with it~

Luz
Luz #15 · Oct 9th, 2016 · · ·

7629684 apparently you haven't been in the internet long enough

A good way to "link" but not "link" a derpibooru image, is to include the number in plain-text. :twilightblush:

This was a surprisingly enjoyable reading for me. I came in expecting to be grossed out considering oviposition isn't a kink I particularly like or read a lot of. I have been branching out lately and reading stories I wouldn't ordinarily read, so I figured I would read it anyway. Plus, I think happy changeling stories are a weakness of mine. This is the second story with a changeling I read and coincidentally, the second story with a fetish I don't like or read a lot of.

But I must admit I am disgusted you would ruin this happy nature of a story by including *shudder* cuddling, in your story. How could you ruin a perfectly good story with something so inappropriate? How could you include such a filthy concept in clop? :pinkiegasp:

I will have to punish you by upvoting this. I didn't want to have to resort to this clearly desperate maneuver but you forced my hoof! How dare you sir!

:rainbowkiss:

I was clearly warned but thought you were lying.

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I have seen hell my dear sir...that image shall haunt me forever

Oh, lord...
All my kinks....
Ffffuuuuuuuuuuu.......(melts).

Fuck, that was Hot! :pinkiehappy:

Well, that was incredibly hot and novel. I think I'll have to recommend it to others.


Minor Nitpicks:

per say

per se

the individuals ridges and veins of his member

individual

7629998 Maybe internet's a new concept to them.

7638626 or maybe they're incredibly STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Boner, why are we here?"

"Honestly ... I don't even know anymore."

"I wanna go home, boner."

"Me too, kid, me too."

All joking aside, not my fetish but 1) mutual penetration, umpf, and 2) nicely done, although it would have been nice to have some reason why the Changelings are in ... Canterlot? Some pony town? Hrm.

You have my fave, my upvote and my 'wut'.

7675024

Damn it now you have me thinking about a boner singing Mother of Mercy by Iron Maiden

the rest of him sunk inside with a lewd plop.

Wouldn’t that be uncomfortable?(——

don’t think I’ll ever get used to this method, but damn, it if it doesn’t feel good!”

Well that was hawt and nice.

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