Fluttershy is spending more time at the Animal shelter rather than practicing her tambourine and backup vocals. The band needs to have a talk to her about it.
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Ouch, one really feels for Fluttershy here, but when one has bigger responsibilities those must always come first.
Two oneshots released in one day? How?
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Careful, or I'll go for three.
7455191 Go for it, I challenge you!
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I would if I didn't want to save my 50th story for something special.
Bittersweet
That was nice.
I wish you'd use contractions in your narration, especially considering this is in first-person. Using dashes to denote emphasis can make a good visual, but depending on the size of the screen, the dashes can get put on lines other than the one the emphasized words are on.
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Careful, I think you're starting to take the word oneshot a bit too seriously!
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I usually do. I guess Microsoft Word got the better of me. Thank you though.
...okay, I want to give Fluttershy a hug right now. So badly.
at least her friends understood where she was coming from and what she wanted out of life. some folks back then couldn't see past the end of the school year and high school was their life.
Wait, what does that mean? I feel in this part, Rainbow wasn't supportive.
Awhh.
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Just because something is agreed to be the correct decision, doesn't mean it's easy. This line is to show undertones that Rainbow doesn't really want to do this, or that it isn't easy for her.
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Oh, gotcha. Thanks for clearing that up.
You should have put this then.
Oooo... ouch, Flutters.
I didn't read Card and thought it read.
Nice job