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Sometimes one's pride is the best motivation to overcome one's fears.
Princess duties are very tiring. When a princess has a bad day, it's usually a really bad day.
Sunset experiences the first, Celestia the second.
They meet thanks to Rainbow Dash and failed teleportation.
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Lol.
Cute story! 
7431929 Thank you
It means so much to me 
Nice.
Never give up.
Keep writing.
The ending was fantastic.
7432262 No prob!
Thank you all for your words of support. I'm glad you enjoyed my story
the ending confuses me what happened there
is this story over or will there be more
The first chapter was solid, despite the dialog being a bit to clipped (short sentences bouncing between too many characters). But it worked. Didn't seem ESL at all. The second chapter had a lot of typos, and would benefit from you rereading it and putting in stuff which should be obvious that you missed. Overall, a very good effort. You earned an up-vote.
However, I agree with 7504893; the story and the ending imply a third chapter. I suspect Sunset will encounter Twilight at the castle, and then she has to win her bet with Twilight perhaps backing her up, or what ever makes more sense to you. Write another chapter. It will be good practice for you!
Then write another story.
I didn't plan on writing a third chapter and I still don't. Sorry if it was confusing but I don't think it's very uncommon for episodes in some soap operas (I think that's what they are called) to end like that, at least where I'm from- you know, characters start doing something and the picture freezes for the viewers to never know what happened next.
And sorry for the typos. As I said, English is not my primary language. I may try to reread it when I have a computer to work on- it's kind of a difficult job when using a tablet.
We need a sequel where Sunset gets movies from Equestria.
I'm a bit peeved that we didn't find out what Rainbow Dash & the others thought about the Power Ponies comics. It just feels too unresolved to me.
Funny one here I like the marrvel films and comics
funny one here
So where is the chapter where Sunset shows her comics to the girls back in Human Equestria?
8323030
doesn't exist
things like this always get your hopes up then never give you what you want