Dear princess Celestia
Ever Since Flurry Hearts 5th birthday we noticed that she's been playing with her new imaginary friend . "Mr. Shade" Alot, she describes him as a " Magical Smoke pony with pretty green eyes". She says that he tells her many secrets and that if she told us then he would have to go away. We are worried and we would like some advice on the matter. Sincerely Princess Cadence
Celestia read the letter once again. Tears filling her eyes. For that was sent so long ago... "I wish i could have seen the signs sooner...then maybe... she whispered quietly to herself, she broke out into a sob once again wishing she could have done something to change fate for the sake of her dearest niece as well as her daughter...
Hello this is my second story that I have been working on it was inspired by Flurry Heart Wants a Pony By TheDriderPony who let me use this idea! And A Thanks to my editor, The Great nβ Powerful Spellcheck DragonHistorian
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I hope you enjoy
(Coverart by me!)
In your small description of this story, (The one that's shown on the front page) the word 'Except' is spelled wrong. And the word friend.
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I hope you enjoy reading it (I wrote the short description at like 3 in the morning so excuse my stupidity
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Thank you!
7345120 No problem. Just trying to help out.
Cool story so far. I'm curious as to how sombra and flurry will keep interacting with each other and other characters. Keep up the good work, I like this
Oh, shite, there goes the neighborhood... great story thus far! Have a fav, follow, like, and a laugh on me!
I believe you mean "peace and prosperity."
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Thx accidents happen!
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Thank you I worked hard on it
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Muhahahahah
Mr shade!!!
Was that forshadowing? I get the feeling her seventeenth birthday is going to be a rather important one to the story...
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Shhhh we don't want to spoil the fun now do we ?
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What about him?
7380742 I never spoiled what~
Forgot to grey his words
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Crap :p
7382004 no prob
Very good so far! Have a like and a stalker
Makes me want to go back and look at my Sombra x Flurry Heart ideas I had way back when the little bugger appeared in Feb./Mar. and get to writing!
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good luck and thx!
Cool!
These two are going to be adorable together.
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Maybe they may or may not be closer towards the end 
who's said that they are going to be together
I love how you used gray text for the smoke guy!
By the way,
should be fillies and colts. (Almost anything that ends with an Y should be pluralized with "ies." For example, pony=ponies, not ponys or pony's or poneez or poneejbhawz, you get the point XD)
Obviously I am not a professional, but I think the description you used really makes it easy for the reader to picture what's going on (Which is, of course, a good thing :D).
Great so far!
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im glad your enjoying it and I got good news for you the next chapter should be out in a few days
THX!
7400613 Yay!
ooohhhh, this is creepy! What a scary way to have Sombra come back, very awesome! ^^
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wait till you read the last chapter Muahhahahah
Awww!
So cute
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Spread the word
Spread my story
7539586 sure but if you wish you can spread the word of me new finally published story
This sounds really, really fucking cool. I'm gonna read this tonight... if I don't fall asleep.
I love it!
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Oh wow you read it!
thank you
Flurry is kylo ren and Sombra is Snoke
What does buck mean
Will you continue this?
Good concept for a story
will you be continuing this story? I hope so tho its unlikely since you haven't logged on in a while, but this story is great and I hope if you ever log on again you continue this!
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Its the pony word for fuck
Γtima, isso Γ© promissor