• Member Since 7th Dec, 2014
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Alyssa Hartwick

These battle scars, don’t look like they’re fading ,Don’t look like they’re ever going away. They ain't never gonna change. These battle scars.....


It was the witching hour.

A lone Mare Trotted along a gloomy path that sat along the winding roots of the Everfree forests mangled trees and plants.

The path was rough and uneven. Seemed only to be used by the forests inhabitants and the lost souls who traveled it

But the mare continued, her resolve never wavering for a moment.

The Darkness stirred


Warning:Rated Teen For Gayness:Warning Is Really Gay: U no like U NO READ!

Thx For Reading!:pinkiehappy:Please feel Free To leave your thoughts in the comment section!:raritywink::pinkiehappy:

This Story's Prompt Was Originally By Anstca!

They're the Winner of the Monthly Prompt Contest Ill Be Holding .....Monthly!:pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2:


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Comments ( 22 )

That was really good. I'm happy with the way you took the idea I tossed out. Truth be told Ive been kinking around this idea for quite a wile now. I might still use it for a story.....If I ever get off my butt and write one.

That's weird. I'm on Chrome on mobile and your story title is just boxes.


Thats probably because i used a text generator to give it a special cover:twilightsheepish::rainbowlaugh:

8050321 :rainbowhuh: I'm on the same yet I see the name perfectly.

Anyone else thinking what I am?
Hello Darkness my old friend?


Actually i based this fic off that song:rainbowkiss::heart:

I can read minds!
(LOL, Not really, but people usually have a predictable pattern... generally)
P. S. How did you do that with the font/style?

How the Hell did you get that format for the story title?

Well thats simple :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:



I see boxes filled with [A] in the tab. but the boxes were mostly empty before. Just replace it with [A]'s or call it Something Different:Firefly's Rejoice.

That was interesting. It was a bit unclear on when it took place. The story itself I REALLY liked. I would definitely enjoy more in this vein.

8051097 Well that was the point in not specifying the date:trollestia: , you see intended to give one a feeling of nostalgia as if they themselves were remembering this as if it was their own distant memory:twilightsmile: I hope i gave you that feeling :derpytongue2:

8051143 Not really. Honestly not having any idea when it was all happening just kind of annoyed me. But that's probably just because of how I read. But it was still a good story and I would still love to see more about these two.

8051159 THERE SHALL BE A SEQUAL THEN:pinkiecrazy:

You have too many genre tags yo. :/

What exactly happened? :O

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?


Its Not Nightmare fuel Its quite subtle :twilightsmile:

Nice little one shot. Well written and would love to see more.

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