"Elysian Heights, huh? Well if it makes ponies outside sleep better...sounds like a hotel rather than an asylum. Everypony partying with Dionysus up in Elysian Heights! Oh God. Did I really just think that? I am tired"
A revolutionary psychologist, Sombra is transferred to the Elysian Heights Asylum outside of Canterlot. His unique brand of magic, promising much. But can he control it? Distinguish between fact and fiction? Only time will tell.
( The Dark element is kind of on and off. Please be critical; I like to know how I can improve.)
Chapters (7)
Omg this sounds good, can't wait for the next chapter
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So... Shining is currently residing in a mental hospital?
You had my curiosity, now you have my attention!
3516834 Thanks :D. Glad you like it.
3517092 You think I should? I hadn't thought about that. Maybe I will
3517158 Thank you Mr Heisenberg.
Interesting idea you've got here. I hope to see more of this soon.
i liked the vision of a doomed canterlot but you got to set a ground on how an asylum room can morph a patient subconscious into a castle and a city maybe with some of shining past in "real life"
3520530 I was thinking that Sombra physically entered Shining's mind and his vision is so vivid that it becomes 'real'.
I thought I could get away without going into Inception levels of crazy. :P
3520446 Thanks. I'm glad you like it!
jajajajajaa and thats how i psychist can be turn into a king nice vision the only problem would be to materialize celestia and lune to "kill" sombra
3523623 You'll see
Maybe they won't kill him. x3
Hmm, story wise it's good. The ending to this chapter definitely caught my interest, and I'm excited to see where this goes
Your grammar is also good, a lot of short, one-sentence paragraphs, but in the format you're using it, that's not a bad thing.
In short, you have a good and interesting concept, not hampered by atrocious grammar, and I sir (or madam) will be following.
3523679 Thank you so much!
You're too kind. I always thought my grammar was atrocious. Oh, and just to clarify, I am a man. xD
NICE
3526299 Thanks. I loved writing this chapter.
very good concept and execution
as well as interesting
3595089 Thank you very much!
I love writing this story 
Fantastic tale, a fitting ending as well, top notch!
3766306 Thank you so much!
Good story.
3768371 Thank you
I only wish it didn't end there. If it went on even further, that would be Awesome!!!
3879755 I might write a sequel if I've got time
That ending… I approve.
Me: I really hope you do a sequel; this was a fantastic story and I enjoyed every word of it. A toast, to the sequel!
Other readers: To the sequel! *glass clinks*
3902424 Thanks ever so much!
There will definitely be a sequel in the future. 
This is one of the most brilliant concepts I've ever had the pleasure to read
T'would be a delight to read more of your work; a sequel is certainly in order!
Pretty please?
5083211 I might well do
It has been a while since I wrote anything,but i'll give it my best
Yay cookie. ~hug
First Spanish, now Latin? Which language will Sombra learn next?
I'm confused.
I'm still confuses.
Ok, just the picture got me laughing, like sombra and chrysalis going at it is hilarious, waaaaaait SOMEONE NEEDS TO MAKE THAT A STORY