Celestia has only one chance.
To save her little ponies from the Toast Apocalypse, she has nothing but an old scroll and a spell. And a list of unpredictable consequences.
It's all about quantum fields and probabilities.
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I was half expecting Ed from Ed Edd n Eddy to show up and aid the ponies in battle :/
BUTTERED TOOOOOAST!!!! *munch munch munch*
Well...this is obviously the weirdest intro to a PoE story I've seen.
The Princesses were OOC and the humor felt forced. I'd recommend Chaplin or some stand-up instead of CWACM for humor inspiration.
7020964 LOL
7021010 It is weird as fuck. I wish I could write a sequel.
7021050 I don't really care.
I wrote this in random fifteen minutes.
7021072 Indeed. Since it was written in such a short time, proofreading would be a waste. You've earned a slow clap for your extraordinary writing ability.
Time is also not, what was it, random?
This might be my fault.
Might.
Probably.
Not.
7021072
Why wouldn't you care? I'd care a great deal if someone took the time to read a story of mine and provide criticism on it. It's one of the ways you can improve as a writer.
Edit: I just read through it and, I must say, this a truly sloppy effort. There are missing words, almost none of the dialogue is properly punctuated, the POV bounces around like a pinball with no apparent rhyme or reason, amongst other issues. My suggestion is to not release a story until you've had the time to go through and clean it up. Writing a story in fifteen minutes is nothing to be proud of if this is what you get.
7021085 It's all your fault.
7021104
Nnope.
7021093 This is not an important story. I would possibly care if it was.
7021107 Then what's the point of posting it? To buff your numbers? If you're not serious about writing, then why are you attempting it?
7021107
It was important enough to write in the first place, which is enough. Anybody like me who has never read one of your stories before this one now has the impression that this mediocrity is what you produce on a general basis. Why would you be content with that when it is easily within your power to fix it?
7021116 I post because I like to write. For fun, for people, for myself.
Don't take this too seriously, chill. Go read another story. No one can please the entire world.
7021129 Are you happy with mediocrity?
Of course you would cause the end of Equestria. With toast.
Oh, this was so completely random, yet I kind of needed it. Thank you, P.H.
Stay toasty my friends.
7021137 I am completely satisfied with myself. Thank you.
7021145 I considered cake... But toast was toastier.
Thank you for reading.
7021156
I'm so sorry for that.
Edit: Also, "Toastocalypse" is a way better title. More clever, rolls off the tongue.
7021156 So basically, you're another jussonic. That actually explains a lot now.
7021170 Don't waste your time with me, friend.
7021050 WHO?
I...wha...but...how...
This is one of those stories, isn't it? you know the one.
(Reluctantly press the like button)
Not sure wtf i just read, and why it make me think of the toaster from new vegas in old world blues dlc.
"YEAH TOAST!"
YEAH!!!!
earth prime! here we come!
and let the cuddling of ponies begin!
and i like my toast only slightly burned that you could still see white parts of it
Just to quote Highly Addicted toast shy guy
"YEAH TOAST"
7021160
If you were to use cake then Celestia would not be able to use the spell beacuse of magic loss.
Oh, I remember this!
BEHOLD THE POWER OF TOAST!!!
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