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Spike is developing feelings for a certain unicorn who has white fur, blue eyes, and is involved in the fashion industry. That's right, it's Fancy Pants! He's just so nice and kind and... Handsome... It's been complicated, to say the least. Spike has never quite felt like this before, and the struggle to deal with these emotions is getting more difficult as time goes on. On a whim, he decides to have a heart to heart with Fancy Pants and try to get some answers.
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Well, I liked that. I wish there was more, but that's just me being greedy.
Not bad. Would probably be better if it had a second chapter showing what happened next.
Wow, this is really impressive! Even though I considered writing a Spike-centered story like this myself, I wouldn't have thought of using Fancy Pants as the object of confusion. But still, it was really well-written, and an excellent look at both characters.
Unforseen
7001137 Dammit, I knee that posting so late would do this to me.
EDIT: Knew. Wow I really should never touch this computer when I wake up/am about to go to sleep.
9+ people disliked cause they homophobic. (Joking)
7001215 I really would like to know if that was the reason or not. It's kind of discouraging not knowing if a story is instantly downvoted because of subject matter or if something is actually wrong with it past that. But I'll neeeeever know.
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A left it a bit intentionally open-ended in case I wanted to continue it. If I do, it'd explore a few more themes, but I mostly wanted to write a character confused with their sexuality without coming to any big conclusion or getting a partner like they normally do in my writing. Even if ironically I hate the cliche of a character confused about their sexuality I just felt like I wanted to write it as it was.
This is really good, and it tackles the subject matter very well. I wonder why so many people disliked this, I sure hope it wasn't because they're opposed to the idea of gay couples (considering the popularity of ships like LyraBon and AppleDash that would seem hypocritical).
7001356 Haha, part of me thinks it's just because it kind of goes against Spike's character to like anybody except Rarity. I toyed with the idea of using Rainbow Blitz or something but I really wanted it to be with canon characters and probably one of the main cast. Spike seemed about the right age to start questioning this stuff is all.
7001356 That's what I've noticed too. That apparently, according to the fandom's logic: "It's perfectly okay if that character happens to be gay as long as they're a girl."
Love and Tolerance everyone!
I don't know what these down votes are about
anyway pls more pls
7001391 I've been so little involved in the fandom for so long I forgot "Love and Tolerance" was a thing.
7001137 *unforeseen
This feels a bit directionless and bounces back and forth a bit too much. It feels spasmodic, and while it does give an indication about how Spike is feeling, it's not a very pleasant style to read, and it just doesn't feel very cohesive.
It could also use some editing.
However, the idea is interesting, and I would like to see where it goes after this.
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Turns out it's unpleasant, directionless, and un-cohesive to live through too.
More? Please?
This is a great story, and I can see where Spike would struggle to come out. Though I feel like he is being slightly paranoid, because if they were his real friends they would accept him.
And fandom wise this confession is
but the description kinda made it "seen"
7002158 (I can't tell if this is an insult to my writing or commentary on real experiences)
7002158 Quite true, but I'm not sure that writing in that style is the best way to translate it into a story.
7002231 I think he meant the situation that Spike is going through.
That's how I took it, anyway.
HA, GAAAAYYYY
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Oh god that reminder at the end of just how much I still suck at grammar. I really really need to learn to improve on that and/or learn to re-read my stories some before I post them.
I'm kind of shocked just how many people want me to continue this just because I left the ending more open than not, if I'm being honest. I guess I failed in that regard. It was something I wrote half as an excuse to be a bit of a soapbox for gay things and also because I love writing Fancy Pants. I'm actually considering continuing it some just because a weird amount of people like it so much.
Yep, definitely in the "please continue" camp
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In no way is it an insult to your writing. In fact I should probably add: NOOOOOO YOU CANNOT END THIS HERE
Well... my heart hurts... congrats, never felt that before.
I continue to love your Fancy Pants. I do feel bad for Spike here... if Fancy still has insecurities about being too old for Blueblood, Spike's crush is going to really unnerve him.
Is this only a one-shot? It's marked incomplete...
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Probably a few anti-Spikes, a few anti-M/Ms, and some Grammer Gorillas.
7006245 I marked it as incomplete because I'm unsure if I want to continue it. Fancy probably still has those insecurities, but that's more because he's actually dating Blue and feels like a prince could get younger if he really wanted and happened to get bored of Fancy.
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7006245 Perhaps the fact that Spike has a new crush on Fancy might provide both of them some fresh insight for both of them. Maybe Fancy would take pity on the little fella's insecurities about being himself while Spike could offer insight how despite how old he appears physically and mentally, he would question why should it matter.
I think with this sort of scenario like say... Fancy invites to talk to him over a snack or something, I think the conversation that those two would have would bring about something interesting.
Then again, it's just a thought.
I'm truly am impressed. No, really, this is great.
When's the next chapter?
PLEASE tell me that your making more. That ending is just..... No!
I really hope for more of this, I'd be interested to see how each of spike's friends would respond to finding out how he feels.
This was an amazing and heart wrenching story. It actually had me crying at the end. I absolutely love it.
Is Spike aged up for this cuz hè is technically still a baby right?
Are you gonna finish this one?