This ain't as easy as I make it look.
After being purged of Nightmare moon, Luna returns to the moon to purge herself of the lingering memories of being trapped there. However, what she does not expect to find is a strange building that wasn't there before, along with a strange being, who wants to be her friend.
Kamen Rider Fourze Displaced
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Whoa...
This is pretty good.
Thus the adventure begins
... looks like a flashback chapter is needed and it's going to be a interesting ride that's for sure. And sorry but I just can't stop laughing at this.
giving the moon itself it's own character is definitely a good way of breaking the dark implications from nightmare moon. Good humor there.
Great Story, Although one nitpick: Fourze has an Orange Circle and a Black Square.
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Thank you
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Wait until I get to the sun and stars
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Doh!
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To be honest, I noticed that error as well but I think I was rather nervous on how to respond to it. I was afraid I might be rude by accident...
6953390 how do you think I feel not noticing the changes they get in cosmic states all of them become silver and a blue line gets added in to the surrounding armor down the middle with them in the center. I never noticed that until a stage show. Usually those things don't get altered except the right arm and on one ocasion the left arm changes in a states change. So the realization all four changes in cosmic was quite jarring. Seriously what the hell.
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Sorry...
A Kamen Rider displaced who is Fourze the Friendship Rider???
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6956780 I don't have a patreon, but I can change that if your serious.
6956783 yeah I'm working on my own version right now but it will take a while. Mainly because unlike yours I'm going to have mine arrive just as nightmare moon is banished and ends up becoming my characters roommate for the time on the moon. I'm pretty much going to do damage control on nightmare moon and give her therapy for 1000 years. I'm guessing a side effect of cosmic energy in a universe full of magic is a expanded lifespan matching the nearest high signature of magic as a attempt to tune the displaced to that particular universe. In other words congrats your displaced is now able to live as long as luna does. Which is going to help at least in both their cases.
When he used his jet pack I immediately thought of rocket man.
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I think I remember that movie...
Twilight putting science at the fore once agains.
.... well interesting you and I are going to use characters named jack though I'm guessing there is different last names to tell them apart. Seriously I'm surprised at this coincidence that popped up. Guess we just think a lot alike here. I mean what were the odds?
Because your awesome!
6967207 Um, I'm no C3PO, but I'm gonna say, long.
6968493 You know it.
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6968559 well I'm currently working on chapter three of mine so once that's done I'm going to publish my version. Should be interesting what the changes happen in mine.
This is adorable, we hope to see how things 'pan out'.
Don't worry I'm not going to do the same thing. Besides I already settled on jack seraph for the name before you wrote the previous chapter. It was a complete coincidence that the two share a given name. The item my fourze was missing though was the cosmic switch. The talking switches that's just you though. I do have the idea of giving the mane six their own rider systems to mimic the elements of harmony for when those have to be returned to the tree of harmony. I'm doing a humaniod equestria.
6973378 I can detect that there is a joke of some form in there, but am unable to determine exactly what it is.
6973404 Phew, that's a relief, can't wait for our Cross, PS: I'm gonna be giving my Mane 6, plus a few others, Fourze based powers of their own, luckily based on your description, it's going to be different.
6973718 In some cases the moment he encountered Luna, the current Element bearers and anyone else related or them directly for periods of undetermined time. He'll be waylaid into the troubles they deal with, on top of any issues from the costume enemies that may pop up.
6973718 yep but that has to wait until we make our tokens. I'm finishing up my third chapter now so it's almost ready to go online and I think you will like how it goes. Everyone by now knows the events of the beginning of the mlp series so I'm going to focus on how it looks to jack saraph. A hint is that there was already a change to the story by then.
Maybe we should have a faint counter for this fic.
6975621 Your idea has been logged and is undergoing serious consideration.
Name: Galaxy
Switch: Cosmic
Description: a light blue mare unicorn with a whitish silver mane with a nebula galaxy cutie mark with the center having 40 as it's core.
Constellation: libra
Constellation's base: the spirit if the first unicorn constellations dedicated to the balance of the weather and the unicorn that helped design the modern weather magic.
Nice one makes things a bit more interesting.
6978914 Okay, should have made this clear, you have to create brand new constellations, it's nice otherwise though.
Life just got weirder, at least no one fainted.
6979429 This time.
Name: Van-Go (named after "Vincent van Gogh")
Switch: #25 pen
Description: A gray coated, straight white maned pegasus stallion with some feathers missing from his wings. The tip of his tail and hooves are stained with ink. Do to his shyness he doesn't speak often but writes instead. As a result, he has a strange habit of using his own feathers to make quill pens to write or draw. Cutie mark is a brush painting the number 25.
Constellation: "The poet" / also known as "The Moon's Poet"
Constellation's base: The constellation is one of the few created by Princess Celestia shortly after the banishment of Nightmare Moon. It was a tribute to a tragic life of a then unknown poet and artist, Moon Struck. His love of the night, moon and it's princess lead to great poems and works of art. He flew higher and higher into the sky to get closer to the now banished princess. Though do to making quills using his own wings feathers, his wings could not hold up.
6985094 Okay, good news and bad news, both of which are the same.
That is an excellent spirit, and exactly what I wanted in a submission, but I was already thinking of making the Pen Switch's constellation a companion to Camera's, but after reading this I am considering doing a preemptive retcon.
Oh, Fourze better be on his A-game soon.
For some reason as we read this we think of power rangers.
Reference to Yamcha's body in DBZ Abridged? Or do you mean the Krillin Owned Count?
Well he is going to give switches which turn people into monsters so that they can "Fulfill" a wish through often times violence and destruction. All in the name of creating better monsters who have special switches called... um... well on Earth they would be the Zodiac Switches, don't know about Equestria though. Still they are just problems which needs some friendship and friendly Rider kick to become better.
Name: Ampére
Switch: #10 Elec
Description: With her distinct curled golden mane and tail that ends looking like lightning bolt and fur plus wings colored crimson she is quickly easy to spot, her think body yet long and limber legs making her taller and more different than most ponies’ bodies. Her eyes slanted within them grey iris that show the scared and tired war veteran that she is. She talks with Scottish accent and crass language despite her voice being too light and energy filled for insults to actual damage. Her cutiemark is a 10, with her club representing the one and yellow lightning creating the 0.
Constellation: Core Arena
Constellation's base: Based in the older times where arena fighting was seen as a great sport instead of something barbaric by the current nations, there was a Gladiator who was seen as quite an oddity among the fans of the sport. Elegance wasn’t part of the sport, yet this Pegasus named Whisper Song used it in her fights against her opponents, always showing spectacular fight with her use of her club and the use of lightning of her Pegasus magic. She then walked onto the battlefield when asked to, there in the great Pony versus Griffon War called The Sky Storm Defense by the ponies and The Cloud Campaign to the Griffons. There she slayed many enemies, saved many allies and was known among her comrades for her Kindness and Princess like Elegance which irritated the Griffons and granted much moral to those scared by battle. She died 4 months before the end of the war in a self-created lightning storm which was made to give her comrades time to escape. She was seen as a hero and a minor Constellation was born.
6989949 Nope, no cookie for you
6989867 Maybe because my other story is about Power Rangers?
6989989 Hmm, nice. Originally I was going to have it be based on the first Pegasi to invent weather manipulation, but this sounds even better.
6989989 Almost forgot, you earned this.
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AJ's keeping them safe for ya.
6990297 Then I suppose I didn't understand what you were asking about.
Shit zoidarts are now appearing. And considering Kai has about now what seven usable switches then he has a long journey ahead.
I see you used my idea.
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6990326 The last part of the story
6992100 OH! That's Pinocchio, right?
6992124 *facepalms* Wrong again.
Okay, I'm going to throw you a bone, that bipedal figure, he's offering the pony a chance to become a Zodiart (Fourze's monsters of the week), "Make a wish upon a star" is just something they say when they make the offer.
6992137 I think I'll just stop. I'm not familiar enough with Fourze. The only Kamen Riders I've watched all the way through so far are Kiva, OOO, and Gaim. I've got a lot to actually watch.
Space magic?
6993213 Hush, this is my world and I'll build it up how I want, space magic is a thing in this universe.
6993230 *Le Gasp* I had no idea!
6975898 Well played.... well played
A little quick, but not ba overall. It's kinda fun seeing him make the same mistakes Gentauro did. (Yes, I am now more familiar with the series. More than halfway through, actually.)