Fluttershy's birthday is coming up in three more days and Discord tries to find her the perfect gift without the use of his chaos magic. But with Discord trying to keep his gift an surprise, an pink party pony wanting to know.
An alicorn keeping an close eye on him, an unicorn that trying find out what he is hiding and top that off with an cyan pegasus wanting to protect her friend and trying to not run into Fluttershy for the whole day.
You got some chaotic birthday.
(Birthday present to my friend Jade Crossroads)
Edited by: Vanilla Mocha
(Disclaimer: I have not written a Fluttercord story since I started writing, so keep that in mind. You can laugh at me in the comments, this was just for my friend.)
Chapters (1)
Hi! You're summary is a bit confusing, and if you wouldn't mind, I was want to help. Here's my version;
Fluttershy's birthday is coming up in three more days and Discord tries to find her the perfect gift without the use of his chaos magic.
But with Discord trying to keep his gift a surprise, a pink party pony wanting to know, an alicorn keeping a close eye on him, a unicorn that's trying to find out what he is hiding, and to top that all off, a cyan pegasus wanting to protect her friend and trying not to run into Fluttershy for the whole day... you've got some chaotic birthday.
This, to me, just makes more sense. Of course, you don't have to change it if you don't want to, but I thought it might help with the flow
7207301 Meh. Everyone should already know I'm bad at those. It already been up for a few minutes and I'm lazy so yeah
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Yeah, although it can't hurt to make it better
. No, that's fine! Cute story!
7207306 There's another one for tomorrow because I hate America and how they are a date behind New Zealand
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...What? New Zealand?
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It a Country little girl, the one I live in.
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Little girl! Gasp!
. The insult!
Wait, I'm kidding
. No, of course I know what New Zealand is, I was just confused why you brought it up. Oh, I just re-read it... Nevermind
I enjoyed this one. It was great. I can't wait for your next story.
7207305 why do u hate America
Okay, a bit of a odd duck of a story but then again it stars Discord so... (Shrugs)
7207484 I don't I just hate the fact that I'm a day ahead meaning I have to make two stories for my friend so one would be on the 12th for her, meaning that two stories go out a day each
Wow...
It was nice even though you haven'the written one of these in a while. That just proves that you still got it in you!
Kinda rushed at the end and the Robo Robin felt outta place but nonetheless enjoyable