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Jade Crossroads


There is no such thing as coincidence and reality is what you make of it. Nothing more, nothing less.

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The current cover art was done by Alyssa Hartwick , who offered to draw one for this story.

A story of knights and a serpentine chimeric beast who has turned it's back to ponykind. That is, until he meets a strange kind of knight. She's different from the rest, and bears no evil intent towards him.

Fluttershy, a knight and friend of Rainbow Dash in the medieval ages where Dragons didn't migrate quite so often, and nopony knew of the ways and mannerisms of the other magical creatures that inhabited their world.

a knight falls for a monster, and is plunged through a world known only in fairy tales to us today. All because of a betrayal, a misunderstanding and a dangerous love.

For this is a story about Flutter Knight!

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 41 )

Should I work on the ending part? I was going to go with a more grim one where Zyla is killed and either Discord goes on believing she abandoned him or he sees this happen and vows his vengeance. I want to keep the story for everyone though and I'm not sure if I could get away with that.

6957548 Do you mean It's fine as is? Or do you mean the idea to change it?

Thank you for replying! :pinkiehappy:

6957595 That's good to hear! I didn't know if it was a little too abrupt to just have a character show up and supposedly care for him and just leave like that without more to prevent her from seeing him.Thank you!:twilightsmile:

Please continue this story!! :pinkiehappy:

6957795 I'm glad to hear it, the next part will start With Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy (or as I've taken to calling her and this story for short, Flutter knight! XD):moustache:

Very interesting so far, more please?

6957845 The next chapter is already in the works, but
It'll be a bit different It'll still have the narration here and there and be in 3rd person, but It'll switch between the two often enough. The next chapter will focus on Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash.

Ooh! Can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm not sure why, but it looks like you misspelled "Tragic". I dunno why. Maybe it's just me.

6973150 Yeah, the spelling of the word used to get me everytime, but its spelt right as is.:scootangel:

6957626 I will admit it is a little sad, but I like it

6982019 I'm glad to hear it! It's going to get a bit more upsetting, but not before a few good chapters I have coming up. :scootangel:

7016355 Neat! So what did you come up with?:derpytongue2:

7065553 I'm working on it. I recently made a blog for a chapter that will come later with a short explanation for why I haven't made another update yet. It's a chapter a spoiler mostly on where the story will start with the Fluttercord factor of it if you haven't read it already.

Hope to see more of Discord.

7131053 If you can contain your enthusiasm for a few hours I'll be able to cook up another chapter. (this one was initially going to go first if you read my note in the previous chapter)

So what do you guys think of this chapter?

Okay, curious about the mysterious fate.

A few typos, but all in all it's an intriguing story so far. Still kinda waiting to hear what Fluttershy's fate is, but I can wait.

7273602 A few more chapter and you'll know. I have a faulty system for sniffing out those kind of mistakes. Notice I said faulty. :rainbowlaugh:

Wait this is an origin story for Discord?

7321895 Not exactly. It won't be in-depth, and what with this being an alt. Universe I'll be taking a few liberties.

oh mah gosh, it's so cute:rainbowkiss:
I mean the ending is a bit sad but it works well with the story. In other words, you have peaked my interest.

I like this story, it’s been sitting in my read it later folder for a while and I’m happy that I’m reading it!

Is this a dead story, because I was starting to really enjoy it!!!

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