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Why would you write this, you heartless monster!? :raritydespair:

(Seriously, though, very well-written, but ... you're still a heartless monster.)

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THIS IS WHY I FOLLOWED THIS GUY.

PAYOFF ACHIEVED.

Comment posted by Dr midnight deleted Dec 30th, 2017

This broke my heart into a million pieces, especially since it implied that they might not even be friends anymore, that they didn't even seem to...feel anything for each other. They're...strangers, it seems.

But hey, the goal was to make it extremely sad, so you did a great job. You always write quite beautifully.

Good thing this is a what if scenario though, because we all know they'd be together forever always always ALWAYS!

I gotta read some fluff now.

Evil.
Beautifully written.
But you're evil.

I feel like my heart was ripped out and torn to shreds. I read this three hours ago and my emotions are still aching, even when I don't think about how empty Fluttershy and Discord must feel. I think you just affected my whole day with only 1,078 words about fictional characters. That takes some serious skill. I mean, I even went and read a bunch of cute, fluffy Fluttercord, yet I still feel down. That's amazing. You are extremely talented. I don't think a fanfic has ever affected me like this before. In my opinion, this is your best work yet. Don't worry about me: I can only feel like this for so long before I snap out if it.

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Thank you for reading:yay:
In my defense, a real monster would have told the story through Screwball's perspective.:fluttershyouch:


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Thanks:twilightblush:


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The two them becoming like total strangers was exactly what I wanted to convey:fluttershyouch:


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Wow...thank you for the high praise
Sorry I hurt you:fluttershysad:

Oh your heartless too! I thought I was the only one! :pinkiehappy:

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:twilightblush:
Thank you for reading:yay:

Okay, I should've known this would hurt just by reading the description. The emptiness they feel between one another, conveyed in only one thousand words, feels so there, and it's pitiful and sad. Ohhh, that hurt. I need fluff to make this pain go away! :raritydespair:

(Great work, though)

6754690 Thank you. That was really sweet and now I feel better. I appreciate it. :pinkiesad2:

6755025 It's alright. I knew it was coming. I knew I would probably end up crying by the end. It also got me in the mood to write my own tragic Fluttercord fanfic, so the pain isn't all bad. In fact, I'm likely to reread the whole thing before bed. I really did like it; it just hurt. And that's not a bad thing at all. :twilightsmile:

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Ah:twilightblush:
Good luck with the fic:yay:

6755157 Thanks. I'll try my best to make it at least half as good as yours.

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Should be an easy mark; this fic doesn't set the bar very high in my opinion. It was rushed out in two hours just because I was feeling quite down:twilightblush:

6755202 Your experience and talent still shines through. I have to say, I am incrediblely nervous about attempting to write and post something. I can't stop thinking about how completely it might fail. :twilightblush:

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Breathe:eeyup:
It takes one of you to write a story. It only takes One hit to the view count to break even.:twilightsmile:
Literally; you can't fail at writing here.
Since you can't possibly lose; there's no pressure. Just do as you will.:eeyup:

6755234 Thank you. That has calmed me immensely. I think I'll just jump in and try. I have to keep in mind that any criticism I get will help me become better. I need to take the risk and see where it goes from there. Do you want me to send you a link when I'm done so you can give your opinion? I fully understand if you don't have time.

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I will make time. It might not be right off; but I will make the time:eeyup:

6755253 Thank you so much! It means a lot to me. :pinkiehappy: Well, I'd better go work on it. See you later!

6753399 The only canon situation when they going to part ways is only after Discord outlive her XD

6755246 Mind if I cut in? I just want to say that I have a feeling your story is going to be quite good. You know your grammar and the biggest thing that turns me away from fics is grammar, and I know you like grammar. And just the fact that you want others to read it before posting means you really care about it. You'll do great, I'm sure of it. I'm certainly going to read and review it.

6756857 Thank you so much! I would greatly value your opinion. :twilightsmile:

holly shit
i really must say this was amazing
i mean i hate fluttercord
i really do
but this was just so very good
hahaha
reallly nice
i liked that !! FAV /)
PS: alternate ending of my imagination:
after Discord stopped showing up in Ponyville to meet up with his friends and to see the Princesses, for several days some of them became worried (either Twilight or Celestia)
he is found sad and alone in his home
and then lots of cuteness, emotions and new found love hehe xDD
DISCOLIGHT AND DISLESTIA OTP!!!!

6757015 ACK THE PAIN :fluttershbad:
You killed my OTP!

6757239 why should my own opinions and likings harm yours ???

6757790 I was joking, I have nothing against your opinion. I actually do understand why people ship dislestia and twicord and hold nothing against your opinion. I'm sorry; I didn't mean any harm. This won't isn't the first time my stupid jokes meant to be friendly were misinterpreted, but that's my mistake.

This story nearly killed me from heartbreak :fluttercry: But it was amazingly written, with emotion and truth to the words :pinkiesmile: Excellent job :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you for reading:yay:

You sir are evil and mean and my eyes got all teary and I was like NOOOOOO dis be my OTP, my one ship and you hath SOILED IT!!!!!

but I still love yu anyway :trollestia:

:ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy:
I regret reading this...

You sir...

Just won gold, silver and bronze...

In the ASSHOLE OLYMPICS!!!
:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

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Thank you for reading and thank you for sharing how it made you feel.:eeyup:

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